It's a lot of time since i went to a Pokémon fiction, i was surprised to find chapters to this wonderful story, thanks for updating It, thanks for your work and your time have a nice day and stay safe

awesome story. i would love to read more

So in one week gary went from pallet to cerulean an evolved a squirtle? bro...

i love this story

Gust is a special attack move while spearow is more of a psychical attacker then a special one.

Pretty good chapter

As part of my annual "read my favorite fanfics," I came to visit. I still love your story.

Pretty great follow up chapter

Pretty interesting first chapter

I already love this Abra.

Update

Yay! The fourth badge and an evolution, awesome. I like Slush Beam felt very Ash.

I'm crossing fingers Abra's next. I really like the confirmation that Ash does get money from winning battles, really eases my worries.

And I'm glad I guessed right that it was an old amber, Ash's excitement and his concern for Eevee's possible disappointment feels spot on. And yeah, aerodactyl is pretty cool. Steven's just as good at Rock types as Steel types

I'm really happy I've gotten caught up

PSyduck and Sneasel hung backtypo. The s in psyduck should be lower case S

How did Abra tell Sneasel what Ash's plan was? She's a Dark type. He can't use telepathy on her, same with side along teleports.

Still, it was good to see Ash visit his mom and introduce his pokemon to her. Ash trying out double battles was fun too. And it helped bridge the gap between Abra and Sneasel so two pidgeys with one rock throw.

How's your chancetypo. It should be "Now's your chance"

What for him to say you can starttypo. It should be "Wait for him"

That was a good battle, Ash showed he learned from his mistakes and he got the Earth Badge. His pokemon are growing stronger and he added another pokemon to his team. I'm hoping Abra evolves soon. It seems like it's about time.

Ash keeping in touch with Misty is great to see. Even if they aren't traveling together here, it's good to know they're still friends.