This the the first fanfiction that I've read in quite a while that I didn't feel a need to skim over and skip parts of the story. You're writing has been pretty good so far and you have kept things interesting. I've only seen the first chapter though and this is just my first impression of the story.

Finally! Do you have any idea how few people view the 9 failures of humanity, the seven deadly sins as positive things? Bakugou said it best! There are reasons for them!

Imagine a DekuOchako vs BakugouTodoroki fight. Oh boy

It was a good ride, Thanks for the story it was so nice. You have become one of my favourite writers with this sole story.

Disappointing

I really hope the planned mechanic for the quirk isn't as basic as him standing between someone and fire.

While I personally don't like Uraraka, that would traumatize me too. I often check on my siblings to make sure they are still breathing while they are alseep. As a child I heard about how a new born can simply die for no apparent reason, and as the oldest it's been drilled into me to take care of my siblings. So while I may not like it, in this fanfic I definitely understand and sympathize with Uraraka.

Fuck you, you made me cry.

This chapter was just... perfect.

You should write a one-shot about the backstory of Doctor Vertigo.

Yay! Ma(nly)doriya to the rescue!

Okay, that math is amazing sir. You have my applause and thanks, because I'm going to use this for a future story I'm writing.

There has been hinted the possibility that Natsuo could be quirkless. Canon has never confirmed what quirk, if any, he has.

Cosmyk Angel

One thing no one thinks about, and this DOESN'T excuse Enji from being an a-hole, and possibly an abuser, but we only see what happens from the perspective of a 4-6 year old. Yes, Enji was training his children too hard or neglecting and isolating them, and it is likely he was also verbally and or physically abusive to Rei, but we know nothing of her history either. There is the possibility that she was suffering from some sort of mental illness beforehand, it could even be something that was hard to identify and was aggravated by Enji's treatment of her. One thing that makes me think their marriage wasn't JUST a quirk marriage, at least starting out, is that he not only remembered her favorite flower after all of that time apart, but that he would bother to have remembered it in the first place, and that he would make an effort to reconcile with her at all showed that he did, at least on some level care. It DOES NOT excuse his treatment of her or the children, but does give an impression that there was deeper stuff going on than we see. Anyhow, I don't know h9w I got off on that tangent, but meh.

I love this story you are writing.

Cosmyk Angel

Bro did the math