Love the story.

Its a cool concept and i would love to read more of it.
Great job.

So is this a self insert? It doesn't come across as Peter Parker at all. He starts like regular Parker, constant self sabotage and all, and then instead of just stopping the self sabotage he and turning his life around he decides to go full ass hole, act like an entitled whiner, blames others for his self sabotageing choices, and spontaneously develops super rizz?

Just to let you know ff PURGEING nsfw Stories from the website

... some Spider-Man fans just make no sense at all... It's hard to consider anyone who actually likes this piece of shit a genuine fan of the character.

I noticed one person in the reviews saying stuff along the lines of preferring this over the "childish, chatterbox Spooderman" treating the character as though this is how he should've been.

No. This is horrendous and frankly, I find it difficult to imagine this poser as Pete. Almost as difficult to imagine some of these desperate losers who lack any ounce of self-confidence as fans of Spider-Man.

As a piece of fanfiction, it's ehh~ mid. As a piece of fanfiction about Spider-Man, "this is... the biggest pile of dog shit-"

Look, I’m all down for Peter saying fuck it, beating up flash, and getting reperations for the, honestly, insidious treatment by most residents. But, an enormous but, did you really have to go with the whole “iamverybadass” motorcycle and leather jacket routine? It’s way overplayed and ooc. Yes, I know this whole thing is somewhat ooc but honestly all the above things he did feels perfectly fair. You could’ve done the taking Liz on a date way better. I want Peter to just enjoy life for once but maaaan c,mon…

This is a great story, and very well written, so please don't drop it and update soon.

Magnificent chapter can't wait for more please update soon

please don't abandon the story! this is great

The only properly competent Peter Parker I’ve come across and it’s in a smutty story. Not that I mind but I do find it hilarious.

Holy shit this version of Spiderman blows the standard crappy childish chatterbox Spooderman out of the water. I’m stoked already.

Moral of the chapter: Mary Jane dates guys for their looks and doesn’t care how good a guy is if he doesn’t wow her immediately. She also is a gold-digger but doesn’t want to be treated like one.

And women really do tend to be bad drivers.

“That I deserve” no. Her physical and mental abuses are NOT deserved.

Finally.

And PC you really are acting as A PC

Very excited for what i assume is an upcoming threesome between MJ and Felicia. I hope Gwen eventually gets thrown into the mix.

Que buena historiaojalaaa se actualice pronto