|Reviews for Making Waves|
| acowles02 chapter 27 . 9/18
And yet ranma slapped the shit outa what 4 guilds at once before his powerup?
| acowles02 chapter 2 . 9/14
Wait. Gildarts can write? I diddnt think the man could read?
| acowles02 chapter 2 . 9/14
Thats bullshit, a loy of stuff has to have some water in it
| acowles02 chapter 1 . 9/14
Havent seen many Cana ones. Then again usually gildarts beats those into submission
| Redpanda1224 chapter 11 . 9/14
Just wanted to say that you’re a damn good author . I love how you mainly use your own content and a spin to cannon.
Damn, please don’t close the door on Mirajane being in the pairing. You’ve done a great job on fleshing out her and Ultears characters that I’d hate to see them with someone else.
| hellhound-d.o.w chapter 34 . 9/13
Just finished reading the whole thing. I can't even count how many times the wrong name was used, more often the further into the story I read. As an example, this chapter has you using Evergreen when she died a few chapters ago, for one. You used Jean instead of what should have been Ezra, I think, once, used the same name several times in a few paragraphs but it was describing attacks by different people, etc. Spelling errors a lot too. It needs to be gone over with a fine tooth comb to find it all.
I like the story otherwise. The plot and characterizations are good, humor is very good, and fights are well done, also. Keep up the good work.
| GoGo44 chapter 34 . 8/28
I know you don't update all that often, but Evergreen is dead in this story... It's kind of weird that you don't have notes or something to remind yourself.
| Guest chapter 34 . 8/20
I may be wrong, but... i thought Evergreen died alongside Grey during Acnologia's assault ? Mind you, if i'd rather be wrong in this case. Losing Grey and Bickslow was already bad enough
| buterflypuss chapter 34 . 8/21
interesting so far. however, natsu was not the one who fought gildarts on tenrou island, bixlow and freed were the ones cubed. and I thought the orcs spawned out of briar patches? isn't that what edolas picked up with the anima? (ch 24)
| WearyCurmudgeon chapter 34 . 8/1
Just a quick note as I noticed something in the Wiki, when I was looking up Natsu's full name.
The Etherious Demons like Seilah will cease to exist when Zeref kicks the bucket, so you might want to find a way in which she becomes part of another species, so she could possibly survive that outcome.
Fake Dragon Slayer like Laxus Dreyar? Or the 5th Gen Dragon Slayers?
| WearyCurmudgeon chapter 34 . 7/29
A) So Ranma pulled a Destructo-Disk, whereas Natsu went for a Kamehameha...
B) Ranma may be an unexpected Daddy. Guess being a Half-Dragon and mating with a Dragon Slayer (aka becoming a Dragon) means that regular HUMAN contraception might not be as effective.
Local Wendy is probably going to enjoy being the Big Sister this time around.
| Thunder Dragon chapter 34 . 7/29
I have a challenge for you that you may like.
It is a Dragon Ball and Fred Perry's Gold Digger Comics crossover.
It is rated T to M.
1st Franchise, Dragon Ball Super.
2nd Franchise, Fred Perry's Gold Diggers comics.
The Genre is Adventure/Family with Fantasy.
The Legendary Super Saiyan of Gold Part 1: The World of the Story. Please merge the Dragon Ball Multiverse with the Gold Digger Multiverse. However the main character is Broly and Broly when he was exiled is transported to the Gold Digger's Earth.
The Legendary Super Saiyan of Gold Part 2: Broly's childhood and childhood adventures. Please have baby Broly be found and taken in by the Diggers family. For Broly, make sure Broly is his Dragon Ball Super incarnation.
Here is Broly's upbringing. As a kid Broly hates having to hurt people and he loves working with animals but he has to wonder where he comes from, who he is, and who his birth parents are and how he is so strong and also why he has anger problems. The Digger's family were honest with him and say that he was adopted but they do not know where he comes from and so these questions will haunt him until his adult life where he starts to get those answers.
Broly also admires the stories of Sun Wukong the Monkey King and when he meets the Legendary Monkey King Sun Wukong becomes Broly's mentor and teacher. For reference on how Strong Sun Wukong should be See DEATH BATTLE! Hercules VS Sun Wukong.
Broly training under Wukong eventually makes Broly become a Zen Buddhist as Buddhism is a major part of The Monkey King's Story.
For Sun Wukong's past stick close to the source material and use Journey to The West as a template for for Sun Wukong's past adventures and all of his powers and abilities. Do not go with the abridged versions.
I would also look at – A Supplement to the Journey to the West a literary spin off of Journey to The West called in Chinese Xiyoubu, 西遊補, written in 1640 and also – Journey to the South also called by it's native name Nanyouji, written in the 17th-century for more of Sun Wukong's adventures.
Take a look at The Journey to The West Research Blog and video's by these people for research purposes. Journey to the West by Overly Sarcastic Productions. Ten Facts About Sun Wukong The Monkey King by ghostexorcist. The Monkey King by La Volpe. And finally The Monkey King by Extra Credits. For the Books on Journey to the West, see Anthony C. Yu's translation of Journey to The West.
Broly's adventures as a kid with his family and friends are like the original Dragon Ball Hunt. But Broly's adventure are similar to the films, Dragon Ball: The Path to Power and Dragon Ball: Curse of the Blood Rubies, Dragon Ball: Sleeping Princess in Devil's Castle, and the King Piccolo Saga but they are also similar to the adventures of the hero that inspired Dragon Ball; The Monkey King Sun Wukong from Journey to The West.
You must add elements of The Lego Animated series, Monkie Kid to this version of Earth and for Broly's adventures as a kid. These events put Broly on the map and solidifies his fame on Earth. Also Broly can also explore all that this version of Earth has to offer Broly as a child.
But Broly still has problems as there has to internal conflict as well as external conflicts for Broly's growth.
Broly as a child has his demons and unlike his adoptive sister Britanny, Broly has to struggle with them for his whole life. He has to work to control his strength and anger for his entire life and Broly also has to wonder who is he and where does he come from? Is Broly a hero or is he a monster? Is he meant to be a killer or is his work as a hero is who he wants to be? That is the core of Broly's growth as a character.
The Legendary Super Saiyan of Gold Part 2.5: Broly's Childhood powers.
Now for Broly's childhood powers. Starting out Broly has the standard Saiyan biology and abilities along with his canon power level of 10,000. Broly also starting out has a berserk fighting style that resembles Adaptive Wrestling and has the healing factor of Z Era Broly along with his Z Era Broly's ability to survive a planet busting explosion and the depths of space. Broly still has Super Era Broly's Saiyan Power and is able to increase his strength with his anger and as he fights but it is merged with Z Era Broly's Saiyan Power which allows Broly to get stronger after recovering from nearly dying and Broly after recovering can also gain new transformations from the experience.
Broly also has the standard Oozaru form and the Oozaru Broly form.
Broly at his best is a Gentle Giant and Tarzan like character who likes being around animals but he hates fighting or hurting people unlike most Saiyans as he is afraid of killing someone and losing control of his strength and also losing control of his anger as he has a bit of a temper. So Broly is trained in martial arts and meditation by his adoptive mother.
But that is not all. Broly like all Saiyans even in childhood is prodigy of combat mastering the Tiger, Monkey, Crane, Snake, Leopard, Mantis, and Dragon Styles of Shaolin Kung Fu.
South Dragon Style is a mashup of the various Shaolin Animal Styles. Students work on a paired striking blocking exercise and practice form techniques. North Dragon Style is different. There are many martial arts that require acrobatic leaps, dynamic athleticism, or the strength to break boards, bricks, or other inanimate objects but Northern Dragon is not one of those arts.
Northern Dragon teaches students to stay firmly rooted on the ground and with good reason. Being grounded to the earth allows the generation of power from the feet on up. What this means is that as an art firmly rooted in the earth the main physical concern will be building up the strength and endurance in your legs and core muscles that will allow you to maintain a stance for longer and longer periods of time. That’s why it's a practice; a discipline. Anyone can do it given the commitment to the practice.
Broly also learns two more styles of Chinese Kung Fu: Tai Tzu and Lui He. Broly also learns the martial arts of Akido, Judo, and Taekwondo. And their is an actual martial arts style called Shotokan Karate which Broly also learns. Shotokan Karate was inspired by Bushido and the philosophies of Zen Buddhism. Bushido is not just a philosophy but also a fighting style of The Japanese Samurai. Shotokan Karate did not originate in Street Fighter.
Broly has to train and work hard to gain better control of his strength and his anger.
Until then Broly when angered enough cannot control his anger or control his strength until he starts to take his training in Meditation, Martial Arts, and takes his Religion seriously. Broly also must work to face down and conquer the Oozaru forms as over the course of the story Broly must master the beast within and the full potential and power of his birthright or become a rampaging monster and risk a bad guy coming along who is strong enough to destroy all of reality.
But that is not all. Broly training under the Monkey King gains a watered down version of Sun Wukong's powers, he does not have Wukong's Immortality, Infinite strength, and is not Invulnerable.
The Legendary Super Saiyan of Gold Part 3: Broly's later powers and later adventures:
Broly's character development and story arc as an adult is about him learning what he can do and him controlling his strength and his anger, finding out where he comes from and who he is, accepting and overcoming the sins of the Saiyan Heritage, being a good son, a good parent, and a good husband, and working to better his universe.
However Broly in his adult years gets finds more self control and discipline in his adult life as he trains even harder and gradually grows in power. And when Broly has better self control and becomes stronger in his adult years he gains a reputation as one of the most powerful beings in existence.
Broly's Base power cannot be measured like in Dragon Ball Super: Broly. When Broly becomes an adult. Broly as an adult also gets the powers from his original Dragon Ball Z incarnation's official Super Saiyan transformations that Z Era Broly had from the video games that do not involve Z Era Broly being mind controlled along with Broly getting more from Dragon Ball Z. But all of Broly's Dragon Ball Z Era's transformations are now scaled to fit Dragon Ball Super Broly. Also the Legendary Super Saiyan transformations are also scaled to fit Dragon Ball Super Era Broly.
Here are the recommended games. Dragon Ball The Raging Blast series, Dragon Ball Z: Dragon Battlers, Dragon Ball Heroes, Dragon Ball Super Heroes, and Dragon Ball Kai: Miracle Battle Card.
In your version of Dragon Ball Z Broly gains and eventually masters all these transformations and their abilities to find self control and master the beast and the power within Broly: Oozaru, The Wrathful Form, Pseudo Super Saiyan, Super Saiyan, Super Saiyan Second Grade, Super Saiyan Third Grade, Super Saiyan Full Power, Super Saiyan A-type, Super Saiyan C-type, Super Saiyan 2, Super Saiyan 3, Super Saiyan 3 Full Power, Legendary Super Saiyan, Legendary Super Saiyan 2, Legendary Super Saiyan 3, Golden Oozaru, Oozaru Broly, Super Saiyan 4, Super Full Power Saiyan 4, Super Full Power Saiyan 4 Limit Breaker.
In your version Dragon Ball Super Broly gains and masters these transformations: Super Saiyan God, Super Saiyan with the mastered energies of a god, Super Saiyan Blue, and Super Saiyan Blue Perfected. When Broly finally masters and controls himself he gains and perfects the last Transformation of Z Era Broly, Broly God. This must be a gradual growth and each transformation ties into his character development and he has to work to master them.
Broly with all his training and new powers is more of a beast than in cannon and in his adult years Broly develops and masters all the other abilities, techniques, and transformations of his Z Era and Dragon Ball Super Era incarnations.
See Hulk VS Broly(Marvel VS Dragon Ball)DEATH BATTLE! as well as all the official power boosts of the listed transformations and use that as a template for Broly's strength in the story.
Despite this incredible power Broly still has weaknesses.
First: Broly's tail can still be grabbed and unless he strengthens it he feels incredible pain and even when strengthened it can still be grabbed.
Second: all of Broly's Dragon Ball Z Era's transformations are now scaled to fit Dragon Ball Super Era Broly. So for Broly they are last resort options that could cause him to destroy reality. Broly has to hold back unless he is in a location that can take his power and meets a challenger who can take it or is just pure evil.
Third: Broly is terrified of losing control of himself and his powers and his anger so he always holds back because Broly's worst fear is losing control and killing everyone and becoming like the original Dragon Ball Z Broly but because Broly also has all his Z Era's transformations including those from the games boosting his already immense strength and with all of his new powers he could be worse.
Fourth: The Super Saiyan 4 Transformations risks Broly turning more violent so he has to work to master those forms savage and violent impulses. This also applies to Broly's Wrathful Form but the Wrathful Form also causes Broly immense pain and the form is unique to him along with Oozaru Broly. Oozaru Broly is also the apex of the Oozaru transformations and its savage instincts and might but lacks control. Also if Broly's tail is cut off he cannot access Super Saiyan 4 and it's variants or his Oozaru forms.
Here is the reason why if Broly loses his tail he cannot access Super Saiyan 4. Super Saiyan 4 is the union of the Super Saiyan and The Oozaru forms and Super Saiyan 4 is the form of a Saiyan who has overcome the Feral Mind of the Oozaru and has mastered The Golden Oozaru or Oozaru Broly forms to reach the apex of primal Saiyan Power. Cut off the source of that power and it cannot be accessed.
Fifth: If Broly is to deep in his anger this can leave Broly vulnerable to opponents just as strong but more skilled. And Broly in his Legendary Super Saiyan forms and at the peak of his anger runs the risk of becoming a mindless monster who in his berserk state who can potentially destroy reality!
Sixth: Broly must seek to tame and control his unstable and endless energy along with his anger problems until then Broly in his Legendary Super Saiyan forms has to burn out some of his energy or risk self destruction. And even when Broly masters his energy and power he is still aware of what he can do to others and to the world if he loses control so Broly holds himself back unless the situation calls for it.
But Broly eventually will master himself, his powers, and conquer his inner demons.
The Legendary Super Saiyan of Gold Part 4: Parings. Broly can get with Sheila Silverear after he tries a to fix her transformation problem and kicks off a good relationship with her when he is successful with helping her. Broly can also get with Barbara "Crush" Duncan after impressing her with his strength. Eventually Broly falls in love with and gets to marry and have kid's with either Sheila, or Barbara "Crush" Duncan.
Britanny gets with Stripe, Kevin and Penelope hook up, Briann gets with Zan, Gina hooks up with Ebenezer Sleake's. Gar hooks up with Luan Geas.
The Legendary Super Saiyan of Gold Part 5: The Super Saiyan Sagas.
Along with Broly going down the events of some of the Gold Digger Comic's Story Lines The Digger's family have to go down a version of the Saiyan Saga but with their level of power things get crazier. At the start of the Namek Saga Broly learns that his people are good and peaceful. In this universe most Saiyans are a race of heroes and peace keepers with the ones who attacked Earth are descendants of exiled criminals.
This causes Broly to once again wonder where he comes from and the question he has been asking his whole life reappears. Is Broly a hero or a monster? Is he meant to be a killer or is his work as a hero who he wants to be? When Broly finds out he is from another universe, Broly knows the truth and he finally knows who he is. Broly is a Hero who choose to become better than the rest of his universes Saiyans.
The Legendary Super Saiyan of Gold Part 5.5: Broly's Saga in Dragon Ball Super. Broly after learning about the Multiverse and also The Super Dragon Balls, Broly eventually gathers them to bring back all the species and planets in his universe that were destroyed including the Saiyans. Broly also gets the God Ki and the Super Saiyan God Forms making him whole and truly Legendary in terms of Saiyan Power.
The Legendary Super Saiyan of Gold Part 6: Broly in Saiyan Society.
After the Gardeners mysteries are unraveled, the events of the final showdown with Dreadwing in Jade Realm and the final battle against The Umbra, Broly decides to teach the Saiyans all of what he knows as he feels like he has done enough to save the world and also teach the next generation of defenders.
When the rogue Saiyan's eventually rejoin the reformed Saiyans and Broly when he masters his powers and himself Broly trains all of the Saiyan Warriors to master the Oozaru and Golden Oozaru forms, the standard Super Saiyan states, and Super Saiyan 4 and it's variants.
Broly also teaches all the Saiyan's Taoist mysticism and philosophy alongside the various martial arts philosophies and Buddhist philosophies and teachings, as well as how to control their strength and control their minds to find Enlightenment and also to try and reform them to one day become heroes.
To quote the Buddha "It is better to conquer yourself, than to win a thousand battles. Then the victory is yours. It cannot be taken from you. Not by Angels, or Demons, Heaven or Hell".
That is the story of Broly. The Legendary Super Saiyan.
| Guest chapter 34 . 7/24
Ah, Didn't Evergreen die in Tenrou Island? Just checking...
| jtawh chapter 34 . 7/22
Didnt Evergreen die against Acnologia?
| jtawh chapter 9 . 7/15
Lmao what’s the point of going attacking invisibly if you’re just gonna announce yourself right before you hit? Ranma had killing blows twice against Midnight this fight that he tossed away with a zinger