I'm sorry to hear that you are abandoning this. I really did like the story, it was a fresh idea in a sea of cliches. Thank you for sharing though :-)

oh, that makes me so sad. I really love this and your other stories. I hope some day you're able to revisit this great story.

Aww gutted, I liked this like many of your pieces of writing. If and when you do return to this I would love to read it and all the others you have. Till then keep up the excellent work

I’m really sorry to read that I thought this story have the potential to become a “need-to-read” but I understand why you do that even if my eyes and heart can’t accept it… leave them time and they’ll be be better never over it but better. I hope you’ll not stop writing and you’ll come back boost with inspiration and everything that you need. Thank you again for this wonderful story and know that I’ll be still waiting for your next story until them: may the road to greatness open to you and that your enemy shall die in blood and despair

Knowledge is Power was an interesting read. If someone does not like a story, one criticism is enough. After that, you are free to leave the story. Not every story is for everyone.
DZ2, whenever you decide to return, write for your satisfaction, and then you can think about anyone else.

Sad to see that it is abandoned. It is a great story. I love your work. Thank you for what you did write. It kept me entertained for hours.

That's too bad. I liked this storyline.

So good

I'm sorry to hear the trolls and whiners got to you, that unfortunately seems way too common here. Thanks for sharing your story with us, I hope this doesn't turn you off from writing again if inspiration hits you!

Darn, sorry to hear it, but on the other hand, as a fellow author, I understand.

I hope things improve fro you, but also remember that the only person you really need to please is yourself.

So be kind to yourself and, in honor of the passing of Charlie Watts, the Rolling Stones drummer, remember:

You can't always get what you want to, but sometimes you just might find, you get what you need.

Narrow-minded dumbasses. Fanfiction is just like "What if" from Marvel and DC.

It's EXPLORATORY and EXPERIMENTAL by definition. I'm sorry to see it abandoned, but I understand you're doing this for your own wellbeing and ability to write.

I hope you write many more things, and the haters all drop off the site on their own. THEY can write their own damned stories if they're so smart!

Sorry to hear it's over. I for one enjoyed reading it. Every time you post something I read it! LOL. I love your writing and look forward to reading your other posted stories and any new stories you decide to share.

People sometimes can be the worst. Why leave a negative review when you can just go back to the search bar and find a different story. I'm sorry you had to endure so much negativity. Wishing you the best as you move on to the next adventure.

So good

Best regards, thanks for writing this!