Reviews for The Fourth Beast |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story but it’s been awhile since it’s gotten an update. Is it still being worked on? |
![]() ![]() Nuh uh he is Obito with dementia on crack chugging Tylenol flavored red bulls |
![]() ![]() This story would have been much more interesting had it been revealed that Naruto is one of the Beasts. But alas, even a write fic writer like yourself isn’t perfect nor immune to filler chapters. *sigh* Making Ophis into some great unbeatable powerhouse will tarnish this story, as the Greeks are already sucking the joy out of this fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() maaaan just be cool and finish this fic i am taured of waiting do not make me wait another year |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update again, I've been waiting too long |
![]() ![]() Waiting for next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you took enough break to write a story so UPDATE IT NOW I AM WAITING |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damnn finally some summary, i had to skip a few chapters because I want to know how naruto doing, now i got the summary, it’ll make sense |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay wth my eyes genuinely hurts reading this. So many scenes |
![]() ![]() ![]() Que se joda la rubia oxigenada sobrevalorada |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished reading this story again, probably my 4th time lol. You left us with a lot of questions and some answers plus the promise of a new adventure for our favorite knucklehead ninja. Looking forward to seeing that adventure as well as some updates on the DXD world like Yasaka and the different factions Keep up the fantastic work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, I like this story, but the writing style confuses me. It’s like all the fun interesting stuff happened in another book that we’ll never get to read, and we’re just left with the boring after-effects. Why did all the action happen “off screen”? It’s been nothing but talking talking talking. |
![]() ![]() I would like to give some comments regarding this fanfic. First, I like it when the mc becomes a villain in the beginning of the chapter until the middle of the chapter, second, here Naruto is still kind by giving The demons, it might be more interesting if Naruto slaughtered them like Madara did, and the last one might be the fight part where it's less told and mostly discusses politics. But This is just my comment regarding this fanfic, if the author thinks it is good, please continue. That's all, thank you from me |
![]() ![]() ![]() This starting from the middle thing is so annoying and unnecessary. Really disappointed by this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() we uh... we finna body ares like kratos did right cause he aint touchin yasaka for shit finna do him in and run the fade |