Why is Lucifer that powerful? He is only an archangel like Michael or Azazel afterall. So while he is more powerful than them but to beat an entire faction as if they were noob when they had a top ten member among them is confusing. Not to mention he should be weaker than Sirzechs and definitely weaker than the Hindu faction top three.

This shit started good but now I barely understand what’s going on every episode has like a new name that I don’t know who it is. Haha

I appreciate what you are trying to do with the world building, but it falls flat when youve got such a great main character who youve spent many chapters fleshing out, only to dedicate entire chapters to mysterious side characters who absolutely suck and we know nothing about. I dont care about solomon, I dont care about bahumut, if you are going to show perspectives, make them shorter. If you have to give backstory just let them monologue when theyre fighting our mc.

Awesome work please continue the story your doing amazing work

This is so good. You should focus on this story first before anything else imo.

Giving Naruto and Shiva a vacation in the middle of a tense situation is too jarring. This feels rushed as hell

se esta volviedno mucha mmda tu historia iba todo bien y ya empezo a valr vrg

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I liked this chapter.

great chapters. Im still suprised that u went from *Spoiler* and the greeks to the worlds and etc. so fast. But it worked very well. Like always amazing chapters.
Keep up the good work

Thanks for the great chapter I was almost confused then checked the title again and realized it’s not just single upload.

How can they decide to not go through with Ophis 'test' if they don't know what said test is? For all they know, they might still be doing exactly what she wants.

Did Ophis just imply that the Author slapped Naruto down?

Awesome

I gush about this fic enough in the discord.

But simply, it can be described in one word:

Kino.