Reviews for Family Connections |
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![]() ![]() ![]() so...I usually don't read fanfics, but I followed a link through the fruity group mailing list... I'm not too familiar with Ranma, but I still found this to be clever and engrossing... ARRGGHH! The only fanfics I ever read are "in progress." I can't take it anymore! PLEASE finish this one soon! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter. I still don't really know who's who. I have to get some of the episodes and watch them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool! Don't see many Ranma/Fruit Basket crossovers out there! Very interesting. |
![]() ![]() Nice chapter! Can't wait for the next chappie! Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am definitely going to have to watch fruit basket! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really need to watch the anime you have xover Ranma with. This would probably all make sense then. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehehehe. Good chapter. I can't imagine Ranma not showing off. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You really overdid it with the description of Ukyou. If her beauty is suppose to come from within rather then just how she looks then it should take a minute or two for anyone to notice. If its' suppose to be her outer self reflecting her inner then she should be described a bit differently so everyone notices the changes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You said cousin way too much. Just refer to them as the three. It reads better that way. So how had Ukyuo changed? Suddenly she's the most beautiful of all the fiancés? and she wont force Ranma to marry her? Lots of changes with no clear explanation of why. OK maybe the training helped but from the description of the changes it's like she got plastic surgery and a good shrink. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I foud your story purely by chance, seeing as I do not visit the Anime Crossover section that often. It was a fortunate visit, at least as far as my readling pleasure is concerned. I enjoyed the five chapters you've posted to date. The story flows well. You've written the characters in such a manner that they are both interesting and entertaining. One thing of note. If you moved this story to the Ranma directory it could possibably increase your readership and review count. Regardless I will be happy to see the next chapter. Good luck to you. |
![]() ![]() Wow! Nice fic! Very inetersting! I like Ukyou and Kasumi by the way... So please continue! I'll be waiting! |
![]() ![]() Great story. Love the idea. Though the spacing in the last chapter was a little confusing at times. Anyway, can't wait to see what comes up next. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE CHAPTER 3! If they are shock with Ukyou, Ranma will kill tham! I am looking forward to chapter 4, I hope soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chapter 2 is better and I enjoy how the crew feel about the new Ukyou. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This look good, and it is nice to see Kasumi starting her own life. |