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chocolatemud chapter 1 . 5/12/2009
well.. actually i tried to find rukawa's story..

then i found this..

and I Like It..

and wait for another..
anatagasuki chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
Uhm, honestly, I think the last dialogue Rukawa said was too OCC and a little corny. Everytime I reread this, I skip this part. I think it was all great except that. The reply could've been more sarcastic, cold, awkward and mysterious acording to Rukawa's personality. Hope you just wanna know. :)

Still, this is your fic and you decide how the lines were said. Great job!
melodia04 chapter 1 . 5/18/2003
ne? this fic is a nice one! actually it's my first one to read a lukawa/bimbo?. Is she your oc? Anyways,continue writing fics like this, i'll really look forward to it.

Gah! rukawa i think

has lots of oocness in there


And really? he accepted that

girl's invitation for one night

without any hesitation?

such an event huh?

_ *hugs gaiety*

wat's wrong with a hug?

*drools by seeing rukawa catwalk*