Reviews for Raindrops
TirOrah chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Poor Makoto! T_T *sniffle* *cries*

This is an interesting twist though, her parents leaving for a second honeymoon. I haven't seen that one yet. I really liked this, it was well written...really emotional actually. T_T And yey, you referenced her thunder element!

Ja ne!
Liv-x-Case-Benson chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
This is a really good story! It shows how strong she really is!

Great job! Keep up the good work!
angry penguin chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Beautifully done.
bebe1984 chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
Its a good story about Makoto.
i liked it
Yami no Nokutan chapter 1 . 7/23/2003
Great writing! The reason why I like Makoto so much, what happened to Makoto is what happened to my cosuin. She is 17 and on her own. She pretends to live with me, but she doesn't. I am already 18, so I live on my own, and I feel drawn to Makoto. My parents got up one day and left. I was only 16, but I survived. Remember this, With great power, Comes great resposiblity. Keep that in mind as you continue to write. Great story!
Tomoe-Sami chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
And again after reading one of your masterpieces, I am left in tears. :')

arrow-of-jane chapter 1 . 4/23/2003
Really emotional story, well writen. Sad, but great nonetheless.
RTD-Jupiter chapter 1 . 4/9/2003
Wow, Beautiful, that's all the more I can say without breaking down into a fit of tears, that was magnificent!
Hokushin chapter 1 . 4/4/2003
aww...this is so sweet )...bittersweet actually.

Good job on this; you've managed really well on exploring the reason behind Makoto's need to be strong.