Reviews for Master Mine Book 1: A Lesson in Submission
ellaspell chapter 1 . 2/12
Just finished and absolutely OBSESSED with the first story xxxxxxx
wwcookied chapter 31 . 1/17
please, please, please, please finish this series; I'm begging you
vampires-r-bloody-hot chapter 31 . 11/12/2023
Love it
DogwoodSlytherin chapter 19 . 9/21/2023
I was literally wondering when we'd get another scene with Luna and Ginna and lo and behold I go to the next chapter and it begins with one. Had to come back and let you know your timing is IMPECCABLE. Well done. 50 points to your respective houses, haha.
Skeptical Chinchilla chapter 29 . 9/4/2023
I've finished the entire story, but I'm writing the review from my favorite chapter - the biggest roller coaster of them all. Thank goodness I was alone in my car (parked at a charging station) when reading through the Easter Day portion - because I was laughing so loud, with abandon, anyone within earshot would have assumed I had lost my mind. And then, I cannot remember ever sobbing (sobbing!) as I read a *sex scene* - what have you two done here?! And, of course, I cried through much of chapters 30 & 31 as well!

You've presented the world of BDSM with such love and beauty! (And, magic! LOL - oh to be able to wave a wand to help with the setup and breakdown of scene elements! And magical bindings!) Thank you for providing such a nuanced and layered portrayal.

You have spun an amazing story and I'm so grateful for it. I read my first fanfic only about 2 months ago and although I am so glad I found your stories (I devoured AWNFTLI) - I also worry that you've ruined me for other writers! I hope you're still getting notifications about your work here - looks like I'm 2 years late to the game for you two - I hope you still get to feel the love from your readers.

Now, I have to decide whether to go to part 2 of Master Mine now or to keep it as a treasure to be enjoyed later...
cathn chapter 31 . 3/24/2023
Omg! This story was amazing! I've just binge-read it over the past couple of days and I loved it. I get the attraction to Snape but as a diehard Lumione fan I'm devastated... I'm hoping Hermione will see sense or maybe a triad will eventuate. No matter what, I'll be following the story. Thanks so much for sharing.
Aimless Creation chapter 14 . 12/15/2022
I’m reading this story for what feels like the third or fourth time now (while waiting for part 3) and I have a sudden desire to read the version of the story where Severus pulled his head out of his ass and trained her himself, instead of pushing her into Lucius’s arms.

That’s all I wanted to say. I’m gonna go back to reading now.
DaisyDear chapter 31 . 10/20/2022
Truly captivating. I’m hoping the third installment of the trilogy will come out soon. You both have such talent- my emotions are running rampant. Thank you sincerely for your hard work
Guest chapter 15 . 4/7/2022
Je trouve cette histoire très bien mais juste un petit conseil dans la haute société on ne dit pas bon appétit c'est considéré comme très vulgaire
ananchanon chapter 9 . 12/24/2021
Really, Daniel Rackliff !
ananchanon chapter 3 . 12/24/2021
WOW , I thought he was Lucius.
Guest chapter 31 . 11/7/2021
Olá! Nunca na vida eu li algo que mexeu comigo quanto essa história. Ela foi perfeita em tudo, desde o desenvolvimento dos personagens, o modo como vc ligou tudo, os sentimentos foram tratados, perfeita, isso demais. Há, a parte do BDSM eu gostei, talvez o fato de vc não ser uma participante tenho sido o melhor, pq foi cativante e eu gostei muito. Parabéns a vcs.
PinguZoe chapter 9 . 10/18/2021
I can't XD ... Daniel Rackliff? Seriously? I'm loughing so hart I can't stop it. It's so good and I was so in the moment ... and this got me of guard XD XD XD lol
Angerosanor chapter 30 . 10/9/2021
I’m loosing hope for Sev, Hermie’s longing, expressions and actions towards Luc eclipse anything and everything she has/feels with/for Sev, she is with him, but she is not with him *heart breaks for Sev*
Angerosanor chapter 26 . 10/9/2021
Mention of a triad in this chapter gives me hope she’ll not leave Sev for Luc, as I feel that’s the direction the fic is taking, I’m full team Sev, but a triad is better than breaking his heart
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