Reviews for Master Mine Book 1: A Lesson in Submission
Aimless Creation chapter 14 . 12/15/2022
I’m reading this story for what feels like the third or fourth time now (while waiting for part 3) and I have a sudden desire to read the version of the story where Severus pulled his head out of his ass and trained her himself, instead of pushing her into Lucius’s arms.

That’s all I wanted to say. I’m gonna go back to reading now.
DaisyDear chapter 31 . 10/20/2022
Truly captivating. I’m hoping the third installment of the trilogy will come out soon. You both have such talent- my emotions are running rampant. Thank you sincerely for your hard work
Guest chapter 15 . 4/7/2022
Je trouve cette histoire très bien mais juste un petit conseil dans la haute société on ne dit pas bon appétit c'est considéré comme très vulgaire
ananchanon chapter 9 . 12/24/2021
Really, Daniel Rackliff !
ananchanon chapter 3 . 12/24/2021
WOW , I thought he was Lucius.
Guest chapter 31 . 11/7/2021
Olá! Nunca na vida eu li algo que mexeu comigo quanto essa história. Ela foi perfeita em tudo, desde o desenvolvimento dos personagens, o modo como vc ligou tudo, os sentimentos foram tratados, perfeita, isso demais. Há, a parte do BDSM eu gostei, talvez o fato de vc não ser uma participante tenho sido o melhor, pq foi cativante e eu gostei muito. Parabéns a vcs.
PinguZoe chapter 9 . 10/18/2021
I can't XD ... Daniel Rackliff? Seriously? I'm loughing so hart I can't stop it. It's so good and I was so in the moment ... and this got me of guard XD XD XD lol
Angerosanor chapter 30 . 10/9/2021
I’m loosing hope for Sev, Hermie’s longing, expressions and actions towards Luc eclipse anything and everything she has/feels with/for Sev, she is with him, but she is not with him *heart breaks for Sev*
Angerosanor chapter 26 . 10/9/2021
Mention of a triad in this chapter gives me hope she’ll not leave Sev for Luc, as I feel that’s the direction the fic is taking, I’m full team Sev, but a triad is better than breaking his heart
Ccmagee chapter 22 . 9/8/2021
I just wanna say I’m not usually one for a large age gap but this story is AMAZING and so hot!
Guest chapter 31 . 8/13/2021
Great story! Thank you for the interesting insight into the world of submission
GreenWallaby837 chapter 16 . 7/12/2021
This story is AH-mazing! I literally just binged read through half of this story and I am just in jaw-dropped-awe! The way you write the characters is incredible! When Lucius and Snape talk with each other I feel like I am there living through their emotions. It’s incredible. Thank you for sharing this story can’t wait to see how it ends.
Meganthompson chapter 9 . 5/24/2021
Fuck, just fucking bloody merlins saggy balls you guys. I’ve been reading most of your stories, separately and together for a while now, and they are all fucking excellent. I’m just a shit lazy reviewer. But thissssss story. Wow. I am not worthy.
Daniela06203 chapter 9 . 5/17/2021
pointed.exclamation chapter 30 . 4/17/2021
There truly aren't stories out there that compare to this series, where the intensity of the smut is actually matched by the genuine depth of emotions. I never expected to feel so moved by these characters in a story like this. Snow and Lissa, dynamite writers, there's no one like you two. Hoping all is well with you and crossing my fingers for an update. I understand life gets in the way and will wait patiently for you because you're worth it.
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