Reviews for Artificial Reality
Betrayed666 chapter 5 . 8/26
This was sent on my phone, not my actual account.
I think that the coin may mean that the advisor fir the literature club has that two personalities disorder. One trusty one not
rikusp2002 chapter 12 . 2/1
The Best DDLC Fanfic I have read till date... Looking for the new update!

rikusp2002
Guest chapter 12 . 9/10/2018
Another great chapter!
Bomb Ring chapter 11 . 8/24/2018
Ho? Well this is interesting I wonder what is going to happen to our dear Elys- Yuri.
As always it is a pleasure to read this.
saggyboy27 chapter 1 . 8/24/2018
Great chapter dude cant wait for the next one -
Guest chapter 11 . 8/22/2018
Still loving the story, keep it up!
ShadowDragon232 chapter 4 . 8/22/2018
Wait 'dunce!'? When did Weiss get here!?
ZombieSlayers chapter 11 . 8/21/2018
Damn cultists corrupting Yuri...
zatask chapter 10 . 8/15/2018
Really good story! Been reading since last week and I'm looking forward to the next chapters! There's some grammar mistakes here and there but it's obvious you know what you want to do with the story! Just be careful of using words too frequently like "ambling" and "heaving", but besides that it's very good! :)
Itsyaboi chapter 10 . 8/9/2018
More plsss... But please maintain brevity when needed! Sometimes the dialogue just drags along but I truly enjoy the characters not to mention the Dokis. Anyway 9/10 and don't forget to post, and good luck on the film project:D
saggyboy27 chapter 10 . 8/2/2018
this is a really good fanfic dude keep up the great work cant wait for the next chapter
nathanpz117 chapter 10 . 7/30/2018
I feel like you should make these chapters a little shorter for the reader, It kinda gets tiring to read so long for one chapter, and sometimes i think it feels like there's too much for a scene or something. Other than that, its a really good chapter, keep up the good work. Hope this helps
The.Void.Is.Null chapter 9 . 7/30/2018
Sir Draven was wearing a lab coat... and the corrupted code was in the lab classroom... coincidence?
nathanpz117 chapter 9 . 7/24/2018
Please make of this! I can't get enough! :D
Azen chapter 8 . 7/18/2018
By all means is this fanfiction good. However, I dread the coming of the demon and pray that somehow, someway, Monika shall be the savior of this fanfiction and prevent such a demon from destroying all that this man has written for us. On the other hand, I am humbled knowing that my friend has done great here and that I must in turn follow up on my own fanfiction.

But by all means, yes, yes and yes, this fanfiction is worthy of my promotion. May this fanfiction. And tip:

Focus on writing new chapters first. Edit them all later when you are done with this series.
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