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"... and magic power to create "literary" anything was far more ridiculous in hindsight"

Misspell, caught!

"This world...

It darker than I expected."

Misspell caught

Where are you dude, your stories are awesome and i hope you continue them

my only gripe with this is for the God of misery and chaos i would've expected her to be more intimidating. and i wouldn't call him immortal bc he still could die very easily.

now i know why your fanfictions are not finished, it seems your out of dark juices ..ha hahahaha, don't bother, like i said in your one piece fanfiction, its going to become boring sooner or later.

All hail The Lord of Edge

Glad you've reconsidered continuing this! It's a really great premise and fandom to work in, especially with your spin on it. I really hope you can get more time and inspiration to make it a focus of your writing!

awesome fic so far

Its good.

Maybe this was one of your earlier works, but your other stuff is way darker.

Okay. This is your worst fanfic. MS is a weak-willed driven addict. And there is no dark here. The guts on the neck are not dark, they are trash horror or something like that.

I like how his lost magic is almost like nen and I'm excited to see where this goes. Good job on the story.

Erza is a Dragon so of course her fire magic would be bullshit powerful