Reviews for Acedia: Depression of the Soul
Wendel Santana chapter 6 . 9/15/2020
Continue, pls!
yukio00 chapter 5 . 5/20/2020
What the shit Dumbledorrrrrrr
Celeste Verteidiger chapter 6 . 4/29/2020
idk, i like the first one better.
LadyMikleo chapter 2 . 4/13/2020
Love that quote "B*tch, dont test me! I have a fork and f*cking Cloud flames. I can show you exactly why the quarto used a bloody fork of all things as his preferred weapon." I laughed my arse off, it's so funny!
Alirrae chapter 6 . 3/1/2020
I wonder what would happen if Harry tried to bake with stevia or some other non sugar sweetener...
Zaidee Lighthart chapter 2 . 2/14/2020
Only on the second chapter of this rewrite and I already am enjoying the changes from the original. Not to say that I didn’t enjoy the original story. Anyway, can’t wait to see how the rest has changed. I’ve been wondering since the original story how Harry being the Cloud varia and a Sky might effect things with his guardians. Bye for now and thanks for continuing this story and sharing it with us.
YaoiBoisReading chapter 5 . 12/31/2019
(Internal screaming)
YaoiBoisReading chapter 1 . 12/31/2019
Oof, the cannon fodder tho XP
YaoiBoisReading chapter 1 . 12/31/2019
This... I liked the other one better... but I’m willing to give this one a shot... though... it’s going extremely fast, and some of it doesn’t make sense... I’ll try to Endure it
SakuraKoi chapter 6 . 11/28/2019
wow
Natsuyuuki chapter 6 . 11/24/2019
Hmm... Interesting. But, I did hope Harry make his own famiglia. At Least, Freelance, Independent, Neutral Famiglia.

I mean, like Arcobaleno. Famiglia, but not famiglia. Arcobaleno was Founded by Seven Strongest.

But, Harry's, be founded by Ex-Wizard with all round specialty. Like Harry, he is a cook, a Chef. Neville, a gardener or maybe, poisonous, rare but not too illegal plants. Draco, a healer or maybe someone who make special medicine, like potioner. Luna, Fortune Telling, or perhaps, someone who deal with animals (?). The Twins, special weapon maker, or still pranks joke shop, but more vicious.

Like Arcobaleno, Harry's or his guardians can take any clients whoever they want. only, they're more tight knit little community (if any wizard beside them who want new life and had flames) or little organization.

So, if Harry's friends (Varia) want Harry to be their temporary Cloud Guardians (For Battle Rings) who he to denies his friends.

But again, Harry still Cloud, he very much love his freedom. after all, his territory are his and his friends freedom.
Mr.Heller chapter 1 . 11/22/2019
A Sky can only be a Sky, they're unique that way, no "cloudy" business possible, otherwise their uniqueness vanishes and they just become boring. Manipulative Dumbledore is just boring to read since everyone writes him the same. And most importantly, while your own gender journey might be interesting, reading about someone else's feels like a waste of time. P.s. Sassy character, and a Bitch character are different things, yet most people can't see the difference, which is sad.
roobug21301 chapter 6 . 11/13/2019
what an interesting/exciting chapter! good job on researching the meanings behind the names for Luna and Co. the only thing that bothers me is that i cant even begin to pronounce most of them. and my 44-ish mind keeps reading Nevile's as Lik-m-aid (the Fun Dip candy)lol
S-Lioness chapter 6 . 11/10/2019
This chapter was funny
Blaque Lotus chapter 6 . 10/30/2019
thank you, I really needed the laugh. it was the funniest thing I've read in a while. keep up the good work.
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