|Reviews for Acedia: Depression of the Soul|
| Mangaqueen1158 chapter 5 . 8/1
This is a really amazing rewrite. I am so happy you decided to keep the story going rather than abandon it like most authors do en they don't like their stories. Thank you so much.
| Thunder-Death chapter 5 . 7/31
Yes! I look forward the following chapters
| Mirage chapter 5 . 7/30
i love how you write
it is interesting and fun to read, you cant wait for next chap
very nice how all of them slowly did meet and learn to like or respect the others how he is friends with lussuria cant wait to see how he takes down ottavio
the restaurant was his best idea and how he cooks:D
vindice seem like scum...the same as dumbledore and minions...they are there to protect the rules of Mafia world and flame active People, ad then they let a crime like what dumles did go and did take People who did nothing...i so hope they will be eaten y dementors(who i hope can unerstand parsel and with this follow harry) voldemort looks against dumledors fake grandfatherbackstabbing friends overf...ing mind like a soft kitten...atleast he tells and Shows what he wants...but dumbles kills Kids and takes there Magic for somethig as sick as this Change of 1 under 100 who could become flame active...i hope he will loose his Magic and feels with his miniond like mundungus they pain and fear of all there victims 10x
cant wait for ch6 and hopeful the taw up Xanxus soon, i so cant for hadrian and xanxus to meet_ maybe even harmonize between this two...what would be crazy but interesting...and potter luck could kick something crazy like this up_
(hopeful maybe even a possible pairing with this two when Harry is older? i think both need someone who is as crazy and strong that could help them Keep there sanity and staying more controlled...and both Need someone who oves them/)
but how ever it will really go, i hope next chap will come soon and you write on as nice as you did with all the chap till now_
| MagicWarriorDragon chapter 5 . 7/28
I’ve never read your reboot but from what I’ve heard based on your authors notes, this is a huge improvement. I’m loving every word of this, thank you so much for writing (and to your beta for their work, as well!) I look forward to more!
| Kyrianae Narii chapter 5 . 7/22
I see your Kitchen Nightmare and raise you the beginings of a world class restaurant franchise/michelin restaurant.
| dogman999 chapter 5 . 7/17
Keep up the good work.
| Shadow Eclipse chapter 5 . 7/12
Lol love it
Food wars recipes hmmmm
Tried the bacon one. It it spook good
| S-Lioness chapter 5 . 7/11
Oh no. And why did the kids disintegrate?
| hellkiss chapter 5 . 7/8
I love it
This new version is like ten times better.
Hope to read more soon
Dumbledore is %$¥
| Shadow Wolf 15846 chapter 5 . 7/7
nice! cant wait for the next chapter!
| Knaruto chapter 5 . 7/5
i love both versions. it would have been cool if you could continue both
| Elfin69 chapter 5 . 7/3
So Dumbledore sold out Remus, Sirius and Severus? Will the Vindice realise them when they find out that they are not on Dumbledore's side and what Dumbledore was doing
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2
| Reclusive Dork chapter 5 . 7/1
don't forget the frankenstein cooking~!
| Sakihinata chapter 5 . 7/1
The first one is hilarious, but anything involving a badass Hedwig generally is ;)
Thanks for updating!