Reviews for Remus' girl
dakotasilverlock chapter 4 . 7/17
Loved the last two chapters! The way you portray everyone through Mia’s eyes is interesting; I feel like I get so much of her character through it. Mia as a character is so so sweet. I think her innocence is a really nice aspect since she is so young and sheltered. I fear for her optimism as she finds out more about how mean people can be. Big cliffhanger though so I look forward to finding out what happened. Really great updates though, keep it up
gielisa chapter 1 . 7/1
Continue pleasee
ToshimiOkami chapter 4 . 6/25
This is really interesting so far, definitely looking forward to reading more,!
Anonymouse301 chapter 4 . 6/19
This story is awesome, you've come up with such an amazing and unusual main character whom I adore and your writing is like that of a native English speaker! If you'd ever like someone to check grammar and stuff before you post I'd be more than happy to do sonot that there's much to correct! Again I love this story and Mia too and I hope you enjoy writing this for a long time to come! xxx
Anonymouse301 chapter 4 . 6/19
This story is awesome, you've come up with such an amazing and unusual main character whom I adore and your writing is like that of a native English speaker! If you'd ever like someone to check grammar and stuff before you post I'd be more than happy to do sonot that there's much to correct! Again I love this story and Mia too and I hope you enjoy writing this for a long time to come! xxx
Peri16 chapter 4 . 6/18
Oh wow what a cliff-hanger! This was a really interesting chapter!
Raven that flies at night chapter 4 . 6/14
I absolutely love this story. Mia and Remus are such good ftiends. I am loving where this is going. You have just gained another loyal reader.
G chapter 4 . 6/11
OMG THAT CLIFFHANGER? Brilliant story please update soon!
The Firework Splat chapter 4 . 6/11
Wow, that cliffhanger was. Awesome. Keep up the good work! I'm Fire btw, and I'm new here
Raise a glass to freedom chapter 4 . 6/11
LOVED this chapter so much, still cute and lighthearted but realistic with the introduction of darker themes and how she forms her new friendship with Marlene. I loved how she met James and Sirius, I thought it was so cute and definitley did their characters justice. Can’t wait until your next update, especially since this one ended so intensely. Remus!
Ely998 chapter 4 . 6/11
Another brilliant chapter , can't wait for the next
Raise a glass to freedom chapter 3 . 6/5
I absolutely ADORE this fic and I seriously can’t wait until the next chapter. Mia’s genuine naivety is so charming, even when her thoughts get a little ridiculous, it’s strangely endearing. I absolutely love her friendship with Remus. It’s only been 3 chapters but it really feels like they’re such close friends. I also really like Clara lmao she reminds me of my older brother and her snappiness feels pretty relatable. Basically I just love everything about this fic it’s just so good and I love as so happy when I saw that it was updated!
Peri16 chapter 3 . 6/4
Another awesome chapter! I could totally see James and Sirius acting like this, and I laughed more at there jokes than I probably should have. I'm also glad they're already including Remus. Amelia is such a real character, I love how she's conflicted about Sirius and James. I also can't wait to see how they interact more, keep up the good work. Oh and thanks for mentioning me!
Lizzy B chapter 2 . 5/31
Amelia and Remus are adorable! Great story! Can't wait to read more!
Brooklyns Finest Hufflepuff chapter 2 . 5/29
Yes yes yes i loved this chapter i cant wait for more and for them to actually meet the boys! Update soon please!
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