|Reviews for Firsk And The Ink Demon|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/17
I think that the plot is very interesting, but I feel that you could combine some chapters or add more detail to make them longer. In addition, you should probably edit the chapters and work on the grammar. You don't have to follow my advice, but I just wanted to point a few things out. ;3
| Vossoch chapter 1 . 5/16
Honestly. You somehow managed to Fup Frisk's name not once, Not twice, but THREE times within the first few seconds of writing the summary. I recommend fixing that.
| RCRC36 chapter 2 . 6/6/2018
| Enchie chapter 1 . 6/4/2018
So Frisk freed the Underground when they where one day old or something?