|Reviews for Under the Broken Sun|
| addicted2clana chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
This is good. Update soon
| Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
Oh Lordy. When she comes into full shock. She’s well on her way to hysteria. Yikes
| FranRichards chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
Please tell me it gets better and Jacob does.
| Elise de Sallier chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
Oh my... I knew that would be tough to read, but it was excruciating. I'm shaking here! Poor Bella. I can see how easily this can happen, where a selfish man interprets the girl or woman's every response the way it suits him, and she is so overcome with fear and shock she just shuts down. We often hear about fight or flight, but we don't hear about 'freezing' which is a very common response to fear. You're a courageous writer to share this here. I hope you don't cop too much flak for it.
Thank you for sharing!
| lala43 chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
Where was it originally posted? And, is it complete? Although this was written with honesty and nuance, I sincerely hope it is because of you being a very talented author and not from personal experience. -Leila
| kaday chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
Thanks for posting on here Erin. Loving this story so far.