|Reviews for Mortality|
| Cashlin Snow chapter 1 . 5/14
Very well done and bittersweet. I think the line, "I've been wanting to die," got to me the most. Love it sorta raw and clenching. Kudos.
| CherryTheRose chapter 1 . 1/26
wow, very well written
| KagamiPINKAgreste chapter 1 . 3/10/2019
-[She] was going to be with her as long as mortality let [her].- This sentence had a mistake. Those should be He and Him. See the difference?
Now this is an amazing one-shot. I could feel the power and love between them here. Shadow needed to admit what his heart craved. Amy wasn't going to allow him to kill himself for anything let alone herself.
| 5ilent Cat chapter 1 . 7/29/2018
OMG this is so sad and beautiful good job
| KMsupergirl chapter 1 . 6/3/2018
Woooooow. Just wooow. I'm seriously speechless... Wonderful job on this short yet beautiful one-shot. You did a an absolutely great job.
| Project Shadow chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.