|Reviews for Into the future and back|
| Sky chapter 1 . 6/9/2018
You should get a beta or proofreader. The premise of the story is good but the sentence structure needs a lot of work. It’s basically run on sentences that are written more as a summary rather than told as an actual story. I honestly couldn’t even get through it all. I do think it was a good idea and hope you’ll get someone to help flesh out your ideas and help your with the writing aspect of it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2018
Uh I like the plot but I don't like how you executed this. This is not a very good story because it's not fleshed out. It's just one big long summary and it's really really stupid. You need to stretch it out and give it more detail and actually have characters talk once in awhile.
| West Allen lover chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
I really love this.I never liked Eddie
| Sammy chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
I really loved your story. Your spelling could use work