|Reviews for A ray of light at dusk|
| bostongal chapter 1 . 2/9/2019
OMGS the end! Wow! So true that in this moment he is there with her and she is both letting and inviting him BECAUSE they both believe she's about to die anyway so frak everything else!
Loved how you described Bill realizing in the beginning that pain could move through walls and bulkheads (such a nice and profound touch adding bulkheads). Also that he would only wear the pins to honor her memory-this man truly carries the weight of himself and the world on his shoulders. Sigh.
Also loved the "I'm fine" exchange when she says that to him and he eventually replies "I'm not" but adds teasingly that she left him hanging on the phone. This was the perfect exchange for them and tie in to their signature phone calls, and you wrote it so well with her appreciating the levity too. Even though there was so much more to his answer than that; they knew it, and so did I as a Reader.
A very thoughtful and moving story from you as always.
| adreamofLucya chapter 1 . 11/6/2018
Oooohhh! This was sooo beautiful! I wish, the show had continued with the scene you wrote. I wonder what would have happened later than when Bill realises that Laura will be cured. I am sure they would have got together much earlier ... Maybe you want to continue? I would love to read your version of the story.
By the way I can't get enough of your fics.
| LeoLovesAries chapter 1 . 7/17/2018
Brilliant and emotive as always
| AdamaGirl chapter 1 . 6/8/2018
This is so pretty, it hurts.
Words cannot say enough- thank you!
| ozzlover chapter 1 . 6/7/2018
OMG THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL I'M GONNA DIE! U ARE DESTROYING ME!
| Starbuck chapter 1 . 6/5/2018
So glad you wrote another story!
I love your writing, and i don't think i can find a fic from you which i didn't like...
They are always so beautiful, little pieces which capture perfectly their relationship and are simply perfect. Thank you for this.
| adama-roslinlove chapter 1 . 6/4/2018
That was perfect and completely lived up to my expectations. I absolutely loved that it started with a phone call and then progressed from there. I really appreciated Bill’s thoughts at the beginning because it was very true to his character. And I loved that she kissed him in the end. There were so many absolutely beautiful moments. Thank you for doing this.
| CloudsOfGreen chapter 1 . 6/3/2018
Bans! That was awesome! Thank you for your wonderful effort
| L-E-HAHA chapter 1 . 6/3/2018
Oh my goodness, another beautiful story! I read the last half of it through tears and they just keep falling. This was so perfect and I can see clearly how this was exactly what happened next! Thank you for allowing them to lead and for giving such a sweet voice for us to share them in. Just marvelous Maria :)