Reviews for Remnants of Dimensions
TheDisplacerOfEquestrias chapter 9 . 6/25/2018
...quick question. Is “Dark Science” an actual story? I wanna read it, now...
Nyx chapter 12 . 6/24/2018
Get have an Idea Last Stardust Scene from Fate Stay night Unlimited blade works or Jaune Vs Gilgamesh
Guest chapter 12 . 6/24/2018
Can you please make a chapter where Jaune is Max Payne and do the whole 3 games or just the first Max Payne game? The first two Max Payne games are sad amd dark. With Jaune as the framed fugitive officer Max Payne, Pyrrha as Max's dead wife Michelle along with their daughter, Lie Ren as Alex Balder, Blake or one of the Malachite Twins as Mona Sax, Tyrian as Jack Lupino, Roman Torchwick as Vinnie Gognitti, Ozpin as Alfred Woden, Salem as Nicole Horne, Mercury Black as Vladimir Lem, Cardin Winchester as Angelo Punchinelo along with Russel, Sky, and Dove as his top henchmen the TRIO, professor Port as deputy chief Jim Brevuera, and Sun as BB (Backstabbing Bastard).

Max Payne is a video game about an police officer whosee wife and daughter were murdered by some junkies. Later he is framed for murder of his partner. Now nothing to lose he takes his revenge on the criminal underworld.

You could have the scene were Jaune (Max Payne) arrives at Tyrian's (Jack Lupino) nightclub "Ragna Rock" but is actually satanic cult. Jaune kills Tyrians cultists members until facing the boss Tyrian (Jack Lupino is insane) and they both fight to the death, but Jaune, manage to kill Tyrian off.

Or another scene Jaune tracks down Roman Torchwick (Vinnie Gognitti, a man who has the brains to run bussiness, but lack balls always falling short; taking his frustration on under-aged addicts and call girls) and this scene takes place:
Jaune: Roman Torchwick just the man I've been killing to see.
Roman: Arc! Freakin' Fed! I knew from day one there was something screwy about you! What d'you think you're doing? You're a freakin' cop, you ain't got squat on us! You can't just come in here wavin' your piece like it meant something!
[Torchwick shoots at Jaune, Jaune dodges and fires back]
Roman: Yeeaargh! Oh my God! Oh God! You shot me, aaaahh! You're dead Arc! What the hell are you waiting for, ya apes? Kill 'im! KILL 'IM!
Mobster: With pleasure, boss!
Jaune Arc: [Narrating] Torchwick bailed. I made like Chow Yun-Fat.
After Jaune catches Roman he interrogates him.
Jaune: [Narrating] Torchwick ran out of steam in a dead end valley with steam boiling out of the sewer grates, like all the fires of hell were burning high beneath us... It was shakedown time.
Jaune: Where's Tyrian?
Romani: Screw you!
Jaune: Bad start, Roman.
[punches him]
Roman: Aaaaagggh! Police brutality!
Jaune: I rate pretty high on that.
Roman: Y-y-ya can't just hurt me in cold blood!
Jaune: Uh-huh, just keep telling yourself that.
Jaune: Listen good, Candy Man. I'm not going to be any body's fall guy. I want to know where your boss is hiding.
Jaune: [narrating] There was no glory in this. I hadn't asked for this crap. Trouble had come to me, in big dark swarms. The good and the just, they were like gold dust in this city. I had no illusions. I was not one of them. I was no hero. Just me and the gun, and the crook. My options had decreased to a singular course.
Roman: I'll tell ya! I'll tell ya, just don't hurt me no more! Tyrian's at Ragna Rock! The night club!
Roman: Book me, take me in, haul me to the freakin' jail, just don't hurt me!
Jaune: Your rights will be read at your funeral.

You can search it up on YouTube for Max Payne (2001) video game and the sequels.
guest chapter 12 . 6/24/2018
What about Jaune as Flint from Cloudy With A Chance Of Meatballs?
Midnight49 chapter 1 . 6/24/2018
Can you tell me where got this story from cuz I would like to read it. And if this is an Original idea from you then can you maybe flesh it out?! Cuz I’m highly interested in this story now!
StryderWo1F21 chapter 12 . 6/24/2018
DVYL may cry would love to see you do first 2 chapters
The Menace Within chapter 12 . 6/24/2018
I liked it. As for next one, I actually haven't read that story yet but its on my list to.
The Darkness Writhes chapter 12 . 6/24/2018
I've always enjoyed a good harem route for poor ol Jaune always crapped in in the show, he always did warrant some happiness. Also trails of blood whoo!
The Darkness Writhes chapter 11 . 6/23/2018
I really enjoy the stories of darkness you write. Hell maybe a suicide jaune story eh? I'm a fan of all types of the darkness shown here besides rape, that is the one out of all of them I despise. Maybe make an evil jaune story without a good ending? Maybe a star wars one where jaune is Anakin? There's already been ones of those made but i still love them all the same. A JNPR turns evil fic would be cool they get corrupted by Grimm or Salem maybe and then they return and surprise kill team RWBY? I love the darker stories put simply. And you do amazing work on these stories!
Guest chapter 11 . 6/20/2018
Can you please make a chapter where Jaune is Max Payne and do the whole 3 games or just the first Max Payne game? The first two Max Payne games are sad amd dark. With Jaune as the framed fugitive officer Max Payne, Pyrrha as Max's dead wife Michelle along with their daughter, Lie Ren as Alex Balder, Blake or one of the Malachite Twins as Mona Sax, Tyrian as Jack Lupino, Roman Torchwick as Vinnie Gognitti, Ozpin as Alfred Woden, Salem as Nicole Horne, Mercury Black as Vladimir Lem, Cardin Winchester as Angelo Punchinelo along with Russel, Sky, and Dove as his top henchmen the TRIO, professor Port as deputy chief Jim Brevuera, and Sun as BB (Backstabbing Bastard).

Max Payne is a video game about an police officer whosee wife and daughter were murdered by some junkies. Later he is framed for murder of his partner. Now nothing to lose he takes his revenge on the criminal underworld.

You could have the scene were Jaune (Max Payne) arrives at Tyrian's (Jack Lupino) nightclub "Ragna Rock" but is actually satanic cult. Jaune kills Tyrians cultists members until facing the boss Tyrian (Jack Lupino is insane) and they both fight to the death, but Jaune, manage to kill Tyrian off.

Or another scene Jaune tracks down Roman Torchwick (Vinnie Gognitti, a man who has the brains to run bussiness, but lack balls always falling short; taking his frustration on under-aged addicts and call girls) and this scene takes place:
Jaune: Roman Torchwick just the man I've been killing to see.
Roman: Arc! Freakin' Fed! I knew from day one there was something screwy about you! What d'you think you're doing? You're a freakin' cop, you ain't got squat on us! You can't just come in here wavin' your piece like it meant something!
[Torchwick shoots at Jaune, Jaune dodges and fires back]
Roman: Yeeaargh! Oh my God! Oh God! You shot me, aaaahh! You're dead Arc! What the hell are you waiting for, ya apes? Kill 'im! KILL 'IM!
Mobster: With pleasure, boss!
Jaune Arc: [Narrating] Torchwick bailed. I made like Chow Yun-Fat.
After Jaune catches Roman he interrogates him.
Jaune: [Narrating] Torchwick ran out of steam in a dead end valley with steam boiling out of the sewer grates, like all the fires of hell were burning high beneath us... It was shakedown time.
Jaune: Where's Tyrian?
Romani: Screw you!
Jaune: Bad start, Roman.
[punches him]
Roman: Aaaaagggh! Police brutality!
Jaune: I rate pretty high on that.
Roman: Y-y-ya can't just hurt me in cold blood!
Jaune: Uh-huh, just keep telling yourself that.
Jaune: Listen good, Candy Man. I'm not going to be any body's fall guy. I want to know where your boss is hiding.
Jaune: [narrating] There was no glory in this. I hadn't asked for this crap. Trouble had come to me, in big dark swarms. The good and the just, they were like gold dust in this city. I had no illusions. I was not one of them. I was no hero. Just me and the gun, and the crook. My options had decreased to a singular course.
Roman: I'll tell ya! I'll tell ya, just don't hurt me no more! Tyrian's at Ragna Rock! The night club!
Roman: Book me, take me in, haul me to the freakin' jail, just don't hurt me!
Jaune: Your rights will be read at your funeral.

You can search it up on YouTube for Max Payne (2001) video game and the sequels.
Tristram Shandy chapter 11 . 6/20/2018
Good old Beacon Academy, where the motto is You Don't Have To Be Emotionally Fucked To Study Here, But It Helps.
Axle09 chapter 11 . 6/20/2018
eh, wasn't that sad.
crow woyzeck chapter 11 . 6/20/2018
Here is an Idea a Underworld Chapter to be exact the 3rd movie rise of the lycans where Jaune is Lucien and the scene is the we can be lycans speech and the escape
Guest chapter 10 . 6/18/2018
This is one of the worst Jaune reaction fic I've ever seen, plus I felt really board while reading this not to mention nearly all of the chapters are depressing in one way or another, like would it really kill you not to be so damn down all the time and I felt like each chapter was so OOC with the characters, oh that might be because these characters aren't based on canon but one of your stories, was I supposed to read that before this, would that have made reading this crap better.
Guest chapter 8 . 6/18/2018
Oh great another idiot who ignores all means of physics, of course two girls can totally have a kid.
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