|Reviews for Remnants of Dimensions|
| Guest chapter 32 . 10/30/2019
So like what the hell was even the point in showing them those worlds were Jaune got with certain girls if he's just gonna end up with Pyrrha, like what was even the point on showing them those worlds with Dragonslayer and Knightshade if your just gonna have Yang and Blake get together.
| Guest chapter 32 . 10/30/2019
Bumblebee ruined the fandom and it ruined this fic.
| Guest chapter 25 . 10/30/2019
Fuck Yang x Blake, why is that even in a Jaune react fic.
| Guest chapter 19 . 10/30/2019
You do know you ruined this whole thing by putting Bumblebee in it right.
| Guest chapter 32 . 9/24/2019
1. Loopy Fist, like Rock Lee. When Jaune was younger, accidentally drank alcohol and nearly destroyed half of Vale/Vale City, and is now not allowed to ever have any just like Nora isn't allowed caffeine. How about he fights Cinder instead of Pyrrha, tries to take Aura-Booster medicine, but mistakingly grabbed alcohol, and destroys Cinder without even realizing it. Ren could probably respond with "he's probably not as bad as Nora, the host could respond with "Did Nora ever nearly destroy half of Vale? Just like Nora isn't allowed caffeine, Jaune isn't allowed alcohol".
2. What about Jaune having a form similar to Naruto's Four-Tailed form? It could either be against Salem or Cinder. This could be a Grimm version of the Kyuubi, the eyes could red-Grimm eyes but still round, and when his skin peels away, could be a swirling black instead of red. He could transform do to his anger and hatred (unlocking a Negative-Aura if you will) for Cinder or Salem.
3. Same as 2 but instead of the Kyuubi, it's Ichigo's Hollow form from Bleach, Salem could be herself, or Ulquiorra.
4. How about Jaune as secretly an SCP Agent in Beacon Academy, he knows how to fight SCPs but not Hunters or Grimm, maybe have them witness him taking on SCPs like 173 "Sculpture" or 682 "Hard-To-Kill-Lizard", any Keter class or even Euclid and Thaumiel class, a good Safe one to have them see is 999 "Tickle Monster". You could even have him as a Class-D trying to survive inside the Foundation's test site. Lastly, remember SCP-1741 "Mal0", how about Jaune downloads the app by accident or as a test and actually lasts the longest and Mal0 (the sexualized/female version) ends being that world's Pyrrha, just with red fur and she could end up calling Jaune "Senpai".
5. Killer B from Naruto, can only imagine their reactions to him rapping and then transforming into a rapping octopus.
6. A member of the Impractical Jokers. I can picture him as either Sal or Murr.
| Void161 chapter 32 . 9/16/2019
"I will write more snippets, not full chapters, of what happens after this. Like the triple confession to Jaune, and maybe Assdam singing Opera in front of the whole White Fang. Don't expect it to be soon, though, I will probably take a week or two off before I start another story."
Well that was a fucking lie.
| Toby860 chapter 27 . 8/24/2019
This was a great cover for this chapter but I kind of wish you would have brought the type Moon cast in just temporarily so they could see and react to it as well
| Guest chapter 32 . 7/13/2019
1. As Thanos in both Infinity War and Engame, the cast will be confused because he is a villain but believes himself to be a hero.
2. Quicksilver in X-Men Apocalypse where he saves everyone from Beacon Academy/Xavier Institute, that one scene, or that and him eventually trying to fight Apocalypse.
3. See if you can guess what this is.
"Momma had a chicken, momma had a cow, dad was proud he didn't care how". Jaune as Chicken from Cow & Chicken.
| SkeletalPheonix chapter 15 . 6/25/2019
*Takes out phone*
Me: Hello, is this the multiversal control agency
Operator: Yes, it is, how did you get this number
Me: Nevermind that, I would like to report a Code-69-Red
Operator: Oh shit, another universe infected with a weird sexual feeling inducing potion
Operator: Alright, I'll call it in
| Guest chapter 32 . 6/9/2019
1. Remember in South Park when the Canadians bombed the Baldwins? Maybe the Canadians could either be replaced with the Faunus or some other faction, and the Baldwins could be replaced with the Blacks, you know, Mercury Black, Marcus Black and any other members of the Black family, Dr. Oobleck/Mr. Garrison could go "all the Blacks are dead"!?, and Marcus or Mercury could be the one guy they missed "haha you missed me-GACK", gets hit with a random missile. If it's Marcus that's killed, then Mercury would laugh, if it's Mercury that's killed, then Emerald would laugh.
2. How about the scene in South Park where the military is preparing to go to war with Canada/Remnant's equivalent of it, Dr. Arthur Watts could be Bill Gates who is killed by the General who could be portrayed by Ironwood who then kills Arthur for either Salem's or Tyrian's face appearing in the hologram. Have Ironwood tell Adam (who is Chef) and the rest of Adam's men that they will be "Operation Faunus Shield", have Adam ask him "have you ever heard of the Emancipation Proclamation"? Then have Ironwood respond with "no, I don't listen to hip-hop". Maybe also have the scene where Adam and his men jump out of the way of missiles saying "Operation Faunus Shield my ass".
3. How about one where Jaune's mom gives birth to 2 hands? Master Hand and Crazy Hand, Jaune as the first one and basically they have their powers from Super Smash Bros. Crazy Hand upon meeting Ozpin with Master Hand/Jaune sitting next to Ruby in the interrogation room, could go "let's play thumb wars!" while holding up his thumb, Ozpin could respond "I'm afraid you are far too big for my hand" unknowingly walking right into a sexual innuendo, much to his chagrin. Now, upon meeting Yang, he could say the same thing but Yang's response could be "I'm afraid I am FAR too big for your hand" she could say with a shit eating grin, Crazy Hand could flee screaming "AH, IT'S A MAN!" while Yang could burst out laughing.
| Guest chapter 32 . 5/15/2019
1. Shaggy from the Scooby Doo movie, Ruby as Scooby/Ruby Doo. I couldn't help but think of that one scene, Ruby goes "rour rom reats rat roop", Shaggy/Jaune goes "no Ruby Doo, your mom eats cat poop".
2. How about one where Jaune eats a magic mushroom? That one web video where the guy goes "Mooooooooooom! get the shovel, get the shovel, all the meat I've eaten today...I forgive myself", and he's trying to get out of the stretcher straps by going "kaboozh, kaboozh".
3. How about Jaune as Phillip in South Park, Terrance & Phillip. They come to Beacon to perform, Ozpin doesn't know who they are and allows them to, they end up singing the Uncle Fucker song.
| Guest chapter 32 . 5/9/2019
1. I don't know if you would get in trouble for a reaction to a fanfic so if this makes you uncomfortable you don't have to do this, but How about Exxxtra Credit by Constable Paperbag, maybe just the funny parts? I found this story to be really funny, it's about Jaune trying to seduce Glynda Goodwitch so he can get passing grades but fails in the most hilarious ways.
2. Spooner from I-Robot, maybe Weiss as the one scientist I can't remember the name of.
3. Brock Lesnar (I know, bizarre, but it popped into my head) Jauck Lesnar? Brock Arc? Maybe a fight against Samoa Joe (or maybe have him as other wrestlers, Roman Reigns, Dean Ambrose, Seth Rollins, Randy Orton, Braun/Jaun Strowman, or the Daniel Bryan vs Brock Lesnar fight), you know, if you watch wrestling.
4. Ragdoll, the one from The Batman, not that horrible portrayal of him in The Flash, they completely ruined his character, stupid costume, and he wasn't supposed to be a Meta-Human, just triple jointed, I was really looking forward to that episode to.
5. As the main character in the Singularity game (can't remember the name of the guy, been a long time since I've played it).
6. As one of the Angry Birds, or maybe Jaune in his human form somehow ends up in the Angry Birds world, either the one with the red one the white one and the yellow one or the one where the Pigs worship a Bird named Gale (this popped into my head but either way, I can't picture him understanding them).
7. Shinichi from Parasyte The Maxim (I would like the scene where Shinichi is in the bathroom at school, Migi tries to erect him because he doesn't know what it is, and a random student next to him says "you know, it's kinda hard to take a wiz standing next to a guy talking to his pecker".
8. How about Jaune in a Remnant where Ozpin's and Salem's roles are reversed.
9. As characters from One Piece; as Chopper using his rumble balls, as Brooke in the episode where they actually meet him, as Roronoa Zolo vs Kaku or vs Kuma, as Gekko Moria or his Semblance is shadow manipulation, as Luffy vs Lucchi or vs Gekko Moria's giant form, as Kaku or his Semblance literally lets him turn into a giraffe version of himself, and as Kuma destroying Thriller Bark.
10. As characters from Naruto; as Kaguya or his Semblance is bone manipulation, as Kakashi or his Semblance lets him copy other Semblances and he has 1000 of them, as Kakuzu along with his weird blob like things in his body, as Kisame or his weapon is literally Sharkskin, as Hidan and he is literally killing Asuma then fighting Kakashi or his weapon is the Three-Bladed Scythe his name could be Hidaune, and as Rock Lee vs Gaara in the Chunin exams.
11. Kingdom Hearts where he is either Sora and he first receives his Keyblade and has to defend Destiny Islands, his home, from the Heartless that first show up, or he is a member of Organization 13 and we get to see Ruby react to the organization's bizarre weapons.
12. James And The Giant Peach, don't know who would be the other characters.
13. Jaune as Naruto following Qrow as Jiraiya to get training from him, Qrow in order to get rid of the brat asks him to get him a pair of melons, nice curvy ones, Jaune gets a watermelon that looks more like two connected ones and looks like a woman's assets, just like in the episode.
14. Fletcher from the Liar Liar movie and Pyrrha as the wife, maybe Ruby or Oscar as the kid?
15. Jaune as the Deadpool in the video game (if you've played this). Remember the blowup doll? How about that could be Pyrrha, Jaune's alter personality just like in the game could go "we're not going to stick our penis in that are we"? Jaune could go "you know it's funny, I still have no idea who this is" after doing god knows what with it.
16. How about a youtouber who plays indie/horror games? He could either be Pewdiepie, Markiplier, or Caspersight (you probably don't know who he is, he's like the first 2 but with a cool English accent), or he could even be the characters in those horror games.
17. Happy Gilmore and Cardin could either be that one asshole trying to win the gold jacket, or he could literally be the golf ball (the golf ball part just sounded funny, not really meant to be taken seriously).
18. Ben from Ben 10 the original series, or Generator Rex, or one of them from the Ben 10 Generator Rex Heroes United movie.
19. The Wild movie, with Jaune as Benny the squirrel and Pyrrha as Bridget the giraffe.
20. Hunter X Hunter, Kurapika and not just because he's blonde, I can picture Jaune as him if his family was killed, and because the show also has Hunters.
21. My Hero Academia, at a loss for which character though (definitely not Bakugo), interesting because unlike Semblances, Quirks can actually alter the body.
22. How about that Portal phone tv commercial? Jaune and his sister are talking through tablets.
Jaune: Happy birthday.
Sister: You remembered!?
Jaune: Of course, your my sister.
Sister: What did you get me?
He proceeds to pick up a sickly looking plant.
Jaune: I got you...this.
Sister: It's half dead.
Jaune: Just like you.
Sister: Oooooh! Oh you wait til your birthday come!
The guy in the commercial laughed with joy and I'm pretty sure the sister knew he was just fooling around, but I found this commercial to be funny.
23. How about the South Park movie and instead of one scene it's the entire movie? Jaune as Stan since they both throw up, Pyrrha as Wendy, so yes, we have a reverse Jaune and Pyrrha situation, Ren as Kyle, Cardin as Cartman, Dr Oobleck as Mr Garrison, Ozpin as God who is a rat, Salem as Satan and Tyrian as Sadam Hussein, honestly have no idea who other characters would be.
24. Dylan, and Pyrrha as Regina from Dino Crisis, considering Dylan is a blonde and Regina is a red-head.
25. Hogarth, Arthur Watts as that one detective, and Ironwood as the general from The Iron Giant.
26. Titan A.E, or the E would probably be replaced with R for Remnant.
27. Treasure Planet, Jaune as the main human character.
28. Hellboy, and Pyrrha as Liz, or it could even be the other way around, Pyrrha could be a female Hellboy/Girl, it could either be the movie (the original ones, not the new one), or the anime, either one would be fine.
29. Beavis, (bizarre, I know), but how about Beavis & Butthead Do Remnant/or Vale?
30. As the main baby from Baby Geniuses.
31. Ace Ventura, either the first one or Pet Detective.
32. Alone In The Dark, either the game or the movie, either way would be fine.
33. The astronaut from Planet 51.
34. Scott Pilgrim, and Pyrrha as Ramona Flowers.
35. Either the main rat or the main human character from Ratatouille.
36. Coop, and Pyrrha as Kiva, and maybe Ren as Jaime from M.E.G.A.S. X.L.R, the E (Earth) in M.E.G.A.S could be replaced with an R (Remnant) and still be pronounced the same, just spelled M.R.G.A.S.
37. Foster's Home For Imaginary Friends. The episode where Cheese is introduced, you know, where he says to Eduardo "I like cereal"! Jaune could either be Cheese, Wilt, or even Max. Coco as the bird-like thing where Cheese points to a box of coco on the table but Coco thinks he is calling her by name, and Ozpin as Mr Herriman and Cheese again says the same thing "coco", it works because Ozpin drinks hot-coco.
38. Men In Black 2. Jaune's Semblance could be a second head that he grows called Johnny that he has to keep in his book-bag. At some point Johnny could pop out in front of Weiss or Pyrrha and go "ya like egg-salad"?
39. My Abominable Monster Classmates Can't Be This Cute by Mallobaude. It's about Jaune being accidentally admitted into Grimm school run by Salem, similar to Rosario Vampire, if you're okay with doing a fanfic.
40. There's a story I read, I think it was called Weiss Doesn't Understand Slang, I don't know who it was by though, but it was really funny, if you're okay with doing a fanfic.
41. There's 2 stories I read by the same guy called Naccarat. One's called Jaune's Grimmhand, it's basically about Jaune coming across a Grimm similar to Migi from Parasyte The Maxim. The second one is called Fracture, it's about Jaune's Semblance being similar to Mob's power from Mob Psycho 100, he just can't stop breaking things, if you're okay with doing a fanfic.
42. How about the season finale of season 13 of Supernatural? The one where Lucifer (Jaune) comes back to Earth from Apocalypse Earth with Michael, or how about the episode where Lucifer grills Dagon for letting Castiel get away with his son, Cinder as Dagon and Jaune as Lucifer.
43. What about one where Jaune is from Earth and ends up on Remnant? Instead of having Aura, it's the 7 Chakras (which he doesn't know about, along with most people on Earth), and the Aura chant by Pyrrha removes the seal on them, and he grows more powerful with every Chakra he unlocks. This would confuse everyone because every time a Chakra unlocks, it's almost like he's unlocking his Aura multiple times and they would think each one was a different colored Aura, and when the 7th one unlocks, he essentially becomes a god like either the Brothers or God with a capital G.
44. Sunny from Big Daddy, have no idea who would be Corrine or her sister or even the kid.
45. Kevin, the main character from Split.
46. Rob Dyrdek (Ridiculousness), Daniel Tosh (Tosh.0), and Chris Hardwick ( /AtMidnight, and Web Soup).
47. Samus Aran from any of the Prime games, although I would like the beginning of Metroid Prime 3: Corruption where the GF ship comes under attack by Space Pirates, have them not know Jaune is actually a girl until they see the word she or her.
48. RWBY: A Grimm Fate by Crusader76, it's about a Beowolf turning into a Faunus do to the actions of Ruby and then becoming a student at Beacon Academy, if you're comfortable with doing a fanfic.
49. How about a Jaune that makes fun of the news? Stephen Colbert (Late Show), James Corden (Late Late Show), and Trevor Noah (Daily Show).
50. This is a rather long one but, Jaune has Buggy The Clown's Chop Chop fruit but as a Semblance. His Semblance activates during his fight with Cardin while Jaune is charging towards him, his body literally falls apart, not that Jaune knows that, Cardin seeing Jaune's body parts still charging him freaks out then drops his mace and runs out of the arena screaming while giving Jaune a victory by ring-out, Jaune says "yeah, you better run" while his head and the rest of his body are hopping up & down, he then turns to the audience & sees them looking at him in horror with many people having their hands over their mouths, Jaune says "what?" then turns around and sees his body in pieces, at this point you should have Jaune freak out and start crying thinking he's either dead or dying while he & the rest of his body hop all over the place while his head runs into his foot, have Ruby beat Pyrrha to Jaune & hold his head against her chest saying soothingly "Shhh, you're okay Jaune", while Pyrrha was only half way out of her chair goes ("No, I wanted to hold his head!"). For the last part, have Glynda help put Jaune back together with her telekinesis while going ("I know I'm a therapist but this is ridiculous, I cannot believe I have to LITERALLY put a student back together"!).
P.s. I know this is a long review of a request list, but you can delete this if you want, it won't bother me.
| Lightning Lord Kaji chapter 27 . 4/6/2019
I wouldn’t say Gilgamesh failed in life, he succeeded in the end. He made his kingdom strong and he taught humanity to let go of the gods even if they didn’t do it right away and unlike most heroes he died in peace, which is ironic. But yeah he’s an arrogant ass that’s for sure. It’s a bit more than that but I see what you were going for.
Aside from that everything felt justified. The characters felt like the characters, which is funny since I felt like they were acting like themselves more than the show, aside from Jaune anyway.
| DraconisNoir chapter 8 . 3/13/2019
I had to stop and review your chapter. While I am aware that your opinions and klor might be different, I disagree that the atomic bombings of Japan were done solely to test these horrific weapons. He should have added that they were used to stop a militaristic regime that had committed its own share of atrocities, and were determined to fight to rhe bitter end, by using propaganda to force their own men women and even children to fight.
The alternative, invasion, would have cost a heart-stoppingly huge amount of casualties on both sides, and caused untold damage.
He should've shown them the footage of the Dresden and Tokyo firebombings
The batlle of Stalingrad, which is still unequaled in sheer brutality in urban combat
Even before, with the horrors of trench warfare, and chemical weapons used by both sides
My point being that I can understand and empathize with his views that the bombs should never have been used, but they were simply the cherry on top of the devastation caused by even conventional weaponry
Tell that to the cast of RWBY
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/2/2019
Chapter 3's warning doesn't make much sense when you realise the only graphic scene is "it is heavily implied that gruesome genocide is happening and you should totally care about it even though it isn't even detailed enough for you to imagine besides big red blood city cuz genocide cuz big evil schnee racist"