pretty good start.

need more update...please

... interesting at first, then garbage five seconds later. Just as I fully started getting excited, oh Weiss thank goodness your still level one, the Oum system. Don't call your story a gamer fic if your character is not a gamer, and since more people have this Oum system then your not a gamer!

I’m really enjoying the story hope you continue it sometime.

You know, the 'Gamer Fic' subgenre is a bit of a sausage fest, even in fanworks of a show like RWBY, where half of the cast are girls. Thus, it's refreshing to see the ladies represented. That the story is also good and the world created well thought out is another point in favor of this fic.

This was a fun read.
Also, I can't get the image of Weiss fighting someone powerful and winning by repeatedly 'Litter'-ing a derelict Cargo ship on top of them.

What a shame that such a good fic was abandoned.

Also, who the fuck sticks a camera in a child's bathroom? The bedroom was creepy enough.

First of all, if she has a younger brother, then she's NOT the youngest of the schnee household. Second, unless you're saying that her bedroom is larger than an entire dorm building, then lots of children have a bedroom bigger than a dorm room. Could be interesting, but you've already shown her to be a moron when she "spammed b during the tutorial."

that was an awesome fight

Two years and I'm still waiting for update please don't be hiatus

hello i really love this story you have been writing been waiting for the next chapter for over a year wondering if your going to keep writing it or if you stopped

I've really been enjoying this story, great job. It's a shame a lot of the Rwby gamer fics I enjoy have inconsistent updates but that's life for ya.

Begone Cliffhanger author update the book it been a while now

Just had an idea that could be pretty awful to consider.

Weiss, with her ability to see Titles, eventually meets someone from Salem's court, with the combat title of "Slayer of Summer Rose"