i feel it was a tad rushed. Not the kiss but how quickly they walked into it. with Peter being dead and MCU Peter sort of being dead, there would have been all sorts of akwardness there.

But MCU Peter also has the whole universe was cut in half thing going.

IDK i just feel that when they kissed one of yhem if both of them should have backtracked a bit with the drama of both of them.

Just found this, havne't read a word but i can already imagie how funny this is going to be.

Bit of a shame this didn't start with the No Way Home time.

Good shit

Only thru chapter 10 but this is really good . Thank you for writing !

Thanks

You Spider-Man is the worst Tom Holland is the worst Spider-Man he sucks he's a whiner and is a crybaby

Have you forgot about the Illuminati society led by the most powerful superheroes of their dimension professor x of the X-Men and reed Richards of the fantastic four they're the ones who keep them separated because they're not supposed to be together but illuminati's society is the one who made change the barrier between parallel dimensions and time travel that's why Dr strange was summon there because of the event of Spider-Man no way home when Stacy would not be allowed to go back and see MCU Spider-Man the Illuminati society would never allow it.

What fans hate disingenuous you already planned for MCU and spider Gwen romance fanfiction don't go and change it as the fans had the decision in what you wrote fans despise fanfiction authors who give the illusion of choice but so far what you done is not bad but just don't do it in the future you'll piss off fans or I suppose it's better than being pissed on that's one way to look at it

Advice don't ask fan on fanfiction for suggestions because just asking for Internet troll problems and toxic fans.

I’m reading this for spider-gwen only

Way too late to suggest big sister little brother type scenario because he still has to go back to his girlfriend MJ and the adventures of no way home and who have to lose his memories of what he experienced.

let's be real, we all saw it coming. but it was executed well, not any more obvious than most of the normal spiderman twist villains

Yeah finally out with the force crush with MJ she is boring and ordinary

Man this Peter is pathetic, kudo author you really got the essence of that character. And the MJ crush sigh is no helping his character at all.

Interesting story so far. I just find annoying and weird the he said Mr. Stark way to much and he said Mr. Stark first than May