I love Tonks but she's always played as being a one-note character. I like how you've rounded her out and made her more complex. I also love Mad-Eye and Charlie, so this was a fun story to read.

Uhuhuhu, a muggle AU, but a muggle AU that makes me believe in it in less than three sentences? Loved the immersion into the story with the Italian dialogue and the fact that Severus shows up and makes Hermione remember everything and unable to focus? Oh boy, were my cheeks red by proxy by the end!

I can't think of a better comeuppance for a cheater than this. Of course, poor Albus was a bit traumatized, but sacrifices must be made, lol.

This story was so humorous that I laughed out loud several times. The mental image of Severus being bombarded by balloons as he opened a card made me crack up. I could even imagine the ridiculous PFTHBTHBTHB sound they'd make hitting his face, lol. Thanks for sharing this absolutely precious story!

Hahaha, a sex dream about Dolohov? Hugo is causing some odd pregnancy hormones to rear their ugly heads. I'm glad I've never had to worry about that, lol. And that ending line was just perfect.

This story started so happily but ended with such a sad note. I applaud you on being able to weave both comedic/light hearted beginning and traumatic/stressful/depressing ending into your story. That end was pretty much like a punch to the gut, but in a good way, you know?

The plot is perfect. The ending is sad. And I'm not refering to the magizoologist...

I think this would be an interesting longer story. Thanks!

Loved this! I would love to see more of this one.

And that's crochetaway for you !

Loved this!

"Apparently, Charlie had been waiting for her as much as she had been waiting for him."
Communication could avoid so many tragedies.

"And she had a feeling he wouldn't be letting her forget it again."
Can't blame him !

Oh man, I would die for a long fic of this.

Oh man, this was so creative! Though it makes me sad that Scorpius cheated on Rose. I always liked them together.