Reviews for Naruto: The Painter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love this chapter, glad to see this story updated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude amazing as always |
![]() ![]() ![]() still I want to know what became of the Rookie 11. did neji die, did sasuke kill his brother or marry Sakura. Hinata's love life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The secret of his parents is revealed, Obito is betrayed, and the world is at a loss on what is happening. From context, Obito never planned for the possibility that the Kyubii Jinchuriki never became a ninja at all. Hope the epilogue has the kyubii in it, I would like to see kuruma’s reaction to all of this. |
![]() ![]() I love your fanfiction |
![]() ![]() Ok 6 |
![]() ![]() Great unique story can’t wait to see what happen next. Hope you update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you still alive? |
![]() ![]() You kinda use the word ‘hence’ a bit much, other than that you’re doing a great job at writing. I seriously love the story of Naruto being a cute insightful painter starting up mischief and changing everyone without even trying. It’s super fun to read. |
![]() ![]() great fanfic cant wait for more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok something that's been bugging me is that you leave author's notes in the middle of the story. I'm fine with them it just breaks the flow of the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() So in essence, you created a version of Naruto that only uses Ninshu through his painting, I really like the story and the application of the concept of Ninshu that you used. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello. I got an idea if you either want to add it into the last chapter or make a new one before the finale, what about Tobi/Madara/Obito. His main drive for this "war" is to create an illusion and just be with "Rin" again. Maybe naruto can get through to him with his art. After all, if he changed Orochimaru from his insanity, then how can Kabuto revive the real Madara when they are no longer looking for immortality. Just a thought. Maybe have an epilogue or sorts involving kakashi or Tsunade. |
![]() ![]() Didn't uchiha clan massacre happened when they were 8 year old? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Magnificent, that Nagato moment of clarity was masterfully executed |