Who better to learn senjutsu and become a sage than the black cat herself, Kuroka.

Talk about a cliffhanger

Nice first chapter :) i hope this goes a long way, not like the other gremory twin fanfics that only make one or three chapters and thats it. :)

Hi

Good Start...

One request, pls don't make Naruto Weak or like Rias and Riser...
He doesn't have "Natural Gifts" ... awesome
I hope you make him like in canon(though with advantage of having resources and support)... You know hard working, never give up attitude...

By the name of the fic... I already have a good feeling

Interested but I hope this doesn't change into a bashing fic

nice start. its a neglect fic but not one of abuse just a "oh yea naruto. woops" going to be nice to see where this goes.

Interesting take for a first chapter. Most of the story was focused on Natsumi to the point she seemed like the MC.

This is a great start to what I believe will be a great story can't wait for the next chapter keep up with all the fantastic work.

Hmm, could be interesting. Especially if it doesn't just end up following canon with Naruto added in. Also hope Naruto actually has goals that aren't the usual trying to bring peace or change the system or other such cliche'd crap.