Good work! Again, I feel for poor Olivia. You really did well in making Inari sound like one of said arrogant goddesses even if that wasn’t the aim she was likely going for. Still though, that’s a reason all its own: what are one man’s thoughts compared to that of a divine deity? I doubt any of us or them, would understand the other. Some natural boundaries separate us from that realm for obvious reasons.

Lol! Good little omake!

Ooh! With canon having arrived, things are gonna get gooood!

Huh. This one chapter seemed to be a bit shorter than the others. Just a casual observation.

Omg! This was AWESOME!

No…that demon…was that Serafall’s brother?!

Oh? Fascinating…

Excellent work! And omg! Olivia basically now being seen as a literal Goddess?! Crazy! Then again, us humans can be quite…stubborn on such matters if we witness/a part of them so I can’t exactly say this is too much a surprise.

And that part with Naruto being "disowned" for 3 months is a bit of an odd move for Sirzechs to do. I know he’s a Maou as well as a brother, but don’t you think this may end up breaking the gap he was trying to mend with his brother?

As for your question, I have a few favorites in Naruto. I can name at least three, though my reasons are my own so if there’s anything offensive when I say this, again, it’s just my own bias.

The first would be Orochimaru. I’ve always been a sucker for the "complicated" characters, and despite his villainous misdeeds, I can’t help but admire his drive and passion for his goals. It only makes me admire him all the more that he was able to live through the 4th Ninja War; something that neither Itachi (cause he was already dead and wished to stop the reanimation) and Madara could do. Not to mention while not as powerful as the two Uchiha, his own genius is something to be admired/feared.

Next is Obito. He’s the perfect example of someone being an outcast/black sheep, become a legend all his own. Especially his unique abilities and the way that even though he realized he was wrong, did right by the protags on the end, a smile on his face all the while, free from his personal "hell".

Finally, there’s Ino. I like her simply because I consider her a better person than Sakura (unless Sakura is written well than she was portrayed in canon) and much more beautiful. I actually loved her Shippuden look when I first saw it and this was before learning what she looked like back before that. Lol.

So yeah.

Niiice. That sums up this chapter enough in my opinion.

Good work on this. Seems family dinner was a bit…pressuring, but I’m glad Natsumi (she’s come a long way as a Queen so far. Good for her!) helped him through it and because he didn’t pass a rain check, he will likely have a better way to keep the pressure off of him. Hopefully.

Dang! Loved this! Poor Olivia. I’m glad a group has found her and at least is willing to help her in this transition of her life. And Akatsuki eh? How fitting! Love it.

Good work. Also nice to see Sirzechs try and mend the gap between him and Naruto.

Good work. Can’t wait to see how Naruto will prove everyone wrong someday. And who’s this Olivia? An Angel of sorts?

Insane! Just goes to show that some people who gain a second chance from a traumatic experience cannot be saved and fall onto a corrupted path…

Hm! Quite the chapter. It’s interesting to see how this is progressing so far. I can definitely understand Naruto’s jealousy towards Rias and her inheritance of the PoD. Not only does its power make him feel inadequate to his sister, with his family more…attentive towards her as well because of this, he seems to have issues on how to still be seen as worth something to his noble aristocratic family.

Still, I’m certain Naruto will come to his own place in the hierarchy of the family. It’ll just take time.