Reviews for Naruto: The Devilish Sage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good start! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, sorry to hear this discontinued. I wish you well and that you find something else to love doing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() well good luck being dead then |
![]() ![]() I'm sure he gets strong. But between his parents and brother being awful for no discernable reason other than you wanted it that way I'm not enjoying this. Little logic and to be used and I don't care for the way your writing most of the Gremory family. I mean, take Sirzechs scene here. He wouldn't even have known Grayfia when he had his first kill since they met during the war where she fought against him at first. I understand you had a vision in mind. I just wish you'd have actually had better reason for the changes. I stand by that this story would've been ten times better if Naruto hadn't been a Gremory. Him being a Lucifuge would've made this far more engaging. |
![]() ![]() In glad you were clever enough to give Naruto an out when it came to marriage. However, it makes little sense. Especially with the favoritism you mentioned. Hell, it's also hard to believe he just be ok with her marrying Riser if his marriage to the Riser's sister could help. Also, I kinda wish you hadn't made him a Gremory. No offense, it just feels like you ripped off Sairaorg but changed a few details. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW Naruto is here kind of a pathetic beta bitch pussy ass cuk soooo...fuck this trash fic i am out |
![]() ![]() ![]() Welp, it was a good read while it lasted. Cheers for actually confirming it's fate instead of leaving everyone hanging, bro. You stay good and take care of yourself! |
![]() ![]() ![]() All that blushing and than he squeaking. What a lame trait to have. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why do you gotta bring up itachi dying like that TOO SOON man I just rewatched Shippuden |
![]() ![]() loving this story, naruto is really fascinating with how he is turning out and the whole demon plot is really interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() What’s Grayfia’s brother’s name again? |
![]() ![]() Hey I know you said this story is dead but could you please atleast give us a rap up chapter like a summary type chapter to end things I'm sure we'd all really appreciate it |
![]() ![]() Sad |
![]() ![]() It was a good story All the best with your other ones |
![]() ![]() NNNNOOOO, I really liked this story! |