In the last chapter, I should have mentioned how much I enjoyed Emily sharing that letter the way she did with lorelai and the good marriage comment. It's nice to see them so positive.

The Chris thing was weird, but exactly as I would have pictured it. They handled it like a team.

It’s funny, that exactly how my daughter broke her arm when she was 2, but she broke hers in 2 places and wore her cast(bright pink) for 13 weeks

Wow - Liz and her husband/boyfriend have lost their baby and he now wants a divorce? He is so NOT a winner. Poor little Jess and the hospital people had to ask - I get that, but I also really hate the intimidation factor that Lorelai and little Jess had to go through. Hopefully Jess heals well and quickly. Isn't Mia just wonderful! Thanks. More soon please.

Poor Jess, he needs a hug. lol

Please write more.

Aww poor Jess!

Please continue

Sorry about the accident. But Lorelai is right: Luke is cute. He has a very full plate right now. Thanks. More soon please. (Will we be seeing a man before long for Sookie?)

So cute how lovey Luke is with Lorelai and that he came home to give her a kiss. Sorry to hear that Liz is in a coma and having troubles again. Such a cute story. I can't wait to read more,

Please write more.

Wow - no Christmas apple tarts! How awful - but they will reappear next year! A letter from Christopher the slime - yuck, but it was nice that Emily said that Lorelai wanting to read the letter was a sign of a happy marriage. And, she is right. The meeting wasn't awful, and Rory's calling "Daddy" was clearly to Luke, but I fail to see the point of the meeting. Christopher the slime had to have daddy's help to get in college - will he need daddy's "help" to stay in college? No compare contrast applicable to Lorelai or Luke versus the slime. Christmas morning was really exciting at the house. Luke got a carrot as a treat! YAY! Thanks. More soon please.

Cute Santa chapter. I get the feeling Chris was hoping Luke wasn't going to be there and he could have a chance to get back with Lorelai. Just my feeling. Glad Luke and Lorelai were able to see through Chris and on to happier times. Love how you wrote Emily and Richard and their holiday party. Cute how Lorelai was pouting about no apple tarts.

Lorelai's disgust for the word potty is funny.

A bit of defiance from little Jessie! He will get there. Happy 21st to Luke, and (shocker) he missed Lorelai when he was with his friends celebrating. November 30th isn't as hard for him as it used to be. Why am I not surprised that Liz didn't remember the 30th was the anniversary of her dad's death? And, she seems to really have it in for Lorelai - still. Can Liz and her new guy (wonder it if will last) handle having a baby? No hat Luke is a bit unusual. Good chapter. Thanks. More soon please. Oh, yes, glad that Rory and Jess' birthday party was such a smash!

Great chapter!