nooooo! bad abandonder of stories! bad!

The fact that so many people like it probably has to do with the fact that it’s actually well written, has character building, doesn’t feature a Gary Stu, and has an actual plot. Good job lol

It's great reading. Only one issue, it's not complete, unfinished.

i never really believed ophis was looking for silence as in no sound, the dragon is a god with near omnisense around her, she probably hears everything, from souls grinding to the earth spinning. why else does a super dragon look for silence if it is as easy as putting up a silencing spell

he is exactly like diodora only with a fetish for young and abused girls, its quite disgusting really

i like wishfufillment as much as the next but this is a little weak, he has everything needs no effort and the universe bends to his will, its like skipping to the end of a story as if its a forgone conclusion.
why not make him very savy with a good head start by some cheating godesses and then let him sucseed everything he does, its much more exciting and the plot would be a lot more realistic instead of being like a bad porno where a taboo is broken just because it was meant to happen

im not sure why you didnt choose to pick up kuroka and shirone aswell, akeno would be nice to but... she was probably taken vey early on

this is good, what happened to this?

Awesome

Amazing story, but why would you end it lile that

When I saw that [OC, Vali L, Valerie T., Gasper V.] I thought that I was finally getting a Male Bisexual Harem protagonist that always wanted, but I guess I shoulda known better smh.

Oh, well. Onto the next chapter we go!

Dude please update soon! This book is fucking awesome! And some longer chapters and smut please. It's a bit too short. Love the team! How powerful are they now anyway? Hope you update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Can we please have some oral or anal sex going?

...that was one of the most shortest lemons ever... you need some more practice writing them dude.

Wouldn't the pawns have been better suited for issei? Or does he have two queens? That would be awesome! Two queens is something you really would need to have!