Extre pragnatism does not get you labelled as a psycopath so no this mc is actually a psycopath and fucked up in the head in my opinion lack of emotions don't mean you will be rational mc is a self delusional liar

fuck you author, for making me read this to the end. This end is worse than Game of Thrones' end.

Honestly I thought it was interesting the first chapter and it just went so goddamn downhill totally 100% not worth the read
If you see this post don’t read this garbage I know I regret it

It was shocking, very shocking. Really a plot twist.

Jesus, I want to like it. It's premise is fun, if standard for a gamer fic, grammar is good, nasuverse is a cool setting I personally havnt seen a ton of fics in. But damn, so far bro really can't go more than 5 minutes without launching into some kind of monolog about how EEEEVILLL he is. I can handle a little 13 year old edginess, it comes with the genra but it's just so cringe. Almost every other paragraph the mc breaks away from whatever he's doing to think overly edgy thoughts about being totally evil and it's really just killing my immersion in the story.

tldr: needs more show, and a LOT less tell

Ah, ignore the part about WWII in my previous post. I saw 1936 and somehow read it as 1946, lol.

You keep saying how the grail war was in 1930 before WWII starts. Yet it's 1936, WWII is over, and still no grail war. Also, you kept saying his family grants silent casting, but he keeps chanting paragraphs out loud, and bragging about how he can get the chanting shorter. Doesn't make much sense.

Also, his inner monologuing is all over the place, makes him sound like an idiot with missing marbles.

Allow me to be the one to say it:

That was a shitty ending.

Where’s the psychopathy coming from?

nevermind. read the reviews and your realize my previous statement was scratching the fucking surface. Don’t read this for your sanity.

Take this with a grain of salt because this is MY opinion and you can simply ignore it. This story so far is meh but the narration is fucking miserable. The third person speaking infuriated me to no end. The moody/edgy way of speaking is putting me on suicide watch. Why the hell does he talk like that? He goes back and forth about regretting and not regretting. He goes on about not smiling and emotions and doing it for himself without regard to anyone else but he still ‘feels bad’ for the lives he took. Pick a fucking lane and stick to it. The premise of a true eternity seems nice but the writing makes it so difficult to read and have a fun time reading it. I’ll keep trying but by god this is miserable. At this point i’m just hate reading and blowing off some of the steam writing this.

Lol... trying to achieve immortality/eternity using a fragment of the power of a being that has died. The being wouldn't have died if it can achieve immortality. Just saying, logic and rationality might not be a thing in this fic.

almost missed this because evil mc is just not my cup of tea. decided to give it a try after it pops in my search results again and again. this is a great work. a bit too much narratives for my taste but it's a good story nonetheless. nice job.

(Absolute Composure) and (Dawn of Madness). You will stay sane because of the first one and will have a supremely powerful sponsor who can grant you immense power.
Yog-Sothoth would be a solid choice as in the moon universe where knowledge is everything you would be able to tempt the magicians who truly rule the world into your underlings.

2 sabers and a ruler? What the hell is going on here, the classes are all over the place. Aren't there special rules in place for a ruler servant to be summoned and I thought only one class can be summoned at the same time, why are there two sabers?!