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Guest chapter 1 . 7/3
Very well done. Loved the story. It's always an honor to have a talented writer create a story regarding 2 awesome ponies. Loved how Dash and Mac stayed in character.

I look forward to any more MacDash stories from you. Lord knows we need more!

Quick note: I did spot some errors, just about two. You used "her" instead of "she" for one error. As for the other, the sentence was structured weird.
James Birdsong chapter 1 . 6/12
Excellent