|Reviews for Broken Lives|
| V01dSw0rd chapter 7 . 8/9
unItalics the narration - such as 'Tattletale admitted in her own mind' (you should probably use NAMES here - so Lisa instead of Tattletale...
That WOULD explain why Coil would've done something different...
Didn't James write about Leviathan? I forget...
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/3
Look how quirky am .
| Mr Beaver Buttington chapter 3 . 8/3
Are you really this much of a bumble-lord in real life, 'cause I have trouble believing that.
| V01dSw0rd chapter 5 . 7/19
'Fights with Lung often Drag On' (because, you know, escalation skillset)
| pixelherodev chapter 5 . 7/18
Don't worry self, I'll give me a limerick!
There once was a fucked SI,
who thought he might stay alive,
then reality sunk in
and so did the knife
and now he has no life
| aregulargamer1 chapter 4 . 7/15
This is actually a pretty good SI story, all things considered. The OC is actually engaging enough that I was grinning like 1/4th into the story. Not entirely sure if you're going to turn this into a cancerous meme-fest crackfic (Not that there's anything wrong with that), or if this is going to be vaguely serious, or ideally, something in between.
I mean, Worm already has a tad bit of CHEESE, mostly in the form of Mouse Protector (She had better show up later. Comedy gold), Assualt, and Clockblocker, but what Worm really needs is HAM.
Delightful corny HAM. As HAMMY as physically possible. This is about one of the few stories I've seen that actually HAM things up. It's great.
Anyway, hope to see more soon.
| duskrider chapter 4 . 7/11
Nice twist on things.
| KrossPhelps chapter 4 . 7/10
Please make it its own fic. We all need more of the Kirito is always right Foundation in our lives.
| Talon Blu chapter 4 . 7/5
had a bad day and i really needed the laugh i got from this fic. thank you
| bystanderwitnessing chapter 4 . 6/22
why do I feel he'll get a cape name Blabber Mouth
| TTGG03 chapter 4 . 6/20
Awesome story man.
| V01dSw0rd chapter 4 . 6/20
If Lung was co-operating, why didn't he say anything?
| Doctor Doofenshmirtz chapter 4 . 6/19
Great story, somewhat.
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/16
lets see how armsy screw this up
| Mr.Azeroth chapter 3 . 6/18
Good story ... i like it .. please continue giving me more to read .