I loved this conclusion! One of my fave mor fics.

This was magnificent.

HJPEV always proved to be intensely emotionalhe refused to believe that ghosts were people and death, solved, because his hopes were crushed by Hermione. Yudkowsky carefully wrote him to be an interesting person and not a Mary Suemaking mistakes, losing to the Sunshine Regiment... being a relatable person, instead of an optimized one.

But he went through Azkaban. With
no dementors to affect his thought process, it’s reasonable to say he could keep his cool and stay rationalby, say, drawing a bit more on his dark side... and not.

This is magnificent. Seeing him treat Quirrelmort as a person to work with and a problem to be solved, instead of a threat to fear and a dark villain to defeat... it’s wonderful. Thank you so much for writing this. It made my year.

It's rare to find a story with more chapters than reviews, and very rare to find a story as brilliant as this one in the same condition!

I was always rather confused by the sequence in hpmor, since the gambit pileup was rather high and everything happened very quickly, but your variation is perfectly clear. I especially like how you pointed out that Harry isn't acting anywhere close to what an eleven year old should act!

This is so brilliant that I'm speechless. From the very first pages I started reading Hpmor, I had a feeling: this Potter will defeat Voldemort not by magic, but smart mouth him to death, so that the poor Dark Lord would be running away screaming (like the Hat was supposed to by McGonagall). Least, in the meantime, they happened to become friendly enough so apparently Harry put himself through the trouble of inventing the way to let the Dark Lord survive as well (because screwing over the entire life and integrity of a person is what friends are for, like with Draco ;D). Thus you have fulfilled my own small prophecy, thank you so much. I really enjoyed reading this and I love how it fits the entire picture, almost smarter than the original ending and still completely in character.

I'm also very interested in the continuation of the story :)
If you still enjoy it and would like to write more I'll be very welcome to read it!

HELLO I AM READER OF YOUR STORY AND I WANT TO SAY THAT THIS IS TOO BEST TO CONTINUE TO HARRY POTTER AND METHODS OF RETIONELITY AS CAN BE WAS. I WANT TO KNOW IF YOU CAN POST IN THE CHAPTER THAT IT IS A GOOD POST TO MAKE AN IDEA OF STROY, BUT I DO NOT CANT TO MAKING IT LIKE A QUESTION UNLESS YOU WERE IN WANTED. PLEASE TAKE FOR IT MY THANKING AND LIVE GREATS LIFE BECAUSE YOU ARE EXCELLENT AUTHORE. THANKS TO BE MAKING TO YOU TOO ALSO VERY MUCH.

I wish so much for this to be continued. You piqued my interest and then ended as it was about to get good. I wanted the details of their plan laid out

Hey, this was a really cool alteration. I like the idea that an unfulfilled prophecy will force its fulfillment with low probability outcomes. That would go a long way in explaining the HPMOR ending which felt rather underwhelming to me. Thanks for writing!