That was a really sweet story I really liked how discord and fluttershy talked things out really sweet

Worried-Discord is something a lot of fanfic writers seem unable to convey without going out of character; you managed to completely avoid that, which shows incredibly good writing and character understanding. You got all of his fear and emotion across without breaking his Discord-ness, if that makes any sense at all. And of course, adorable Fluttershy-Discord interactions are always wonderful to read :)

Such precious friends, just-
I love how deeply Discord cares, and how he tries to brush it off, but it's hard to stop caring once you start, y'know?

This was pretty good work on a MLP fic. I don't read them as often as I do IZ ones, but still pretty good.