please keep going!

Lol love ur fandom

Keep up the good work! Update soon please...

Great update! I love this so damn much haha its everything I love with vegeta, bulma and their children. Thank you for mentioning my name as well on the update I was so surprised! I'll will be waiting for the next! :D 3

This is soo good! I like the constant struggle trunks and vegeta have with there females haha!
Please update soon! X

So Trunks is going to get Mai pregnant in the next chapter? Awesome!

Kitty in the Box: (since ffnet has no visible reply option like AO3, I'll do it like this)
I'm sorry you didn't like that. there was supposed to be some dark humor in that but it appears like not everybody agrees with it. I'll try to tune it down for future chapters.

the first child will be conceived soon anyway (at the end of the next chapter or the beginning of the one after that) and that will change things a lot, as well as bring in an enemy to fight. so the males finally have something to "do"

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sidenote: I just checked the next chapter and guess what I wrote first:

Trunks who had sipped his drink to fight his dry throat spit it out instantly when he heard that. Next to him Mai could barely keep her laughter contained. “WHAT? You mean… ewwwww… Mom, I’ve got one request. Can I please have my own gravity room?”

Bulma gave him a smile filled with pity. “I’ve already finished the sketches and started construction.” She waved at him. “I too don’t want to walk in on you guys.” With that she left the room.

Once she was out of earshot Trunks moaned in embarrassment. “She can be impossible sometimes.”

“Don’t tell me. She was the one explaining Saiyan mating habits to me…”

“We need to find our own house.” Trunks said sternly.

“And fast…” Mai answered with a shudder.

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so it seems like even i had thought it would be enough for now XD
for you I'll add them making sure to have their own separate den somewhere XD

May I ask if the story is gonna be a porn contest between Trunks and his parents? Personally I'm not really convinced that Bulma would allow herself to be used as a pawn like this. Why does all the sex have to happen in their house at the same time? It isn't like either of them can't afford to go on an impromptu mating session to some exclusive island or heck outer space even? I get it about establishing the alpha status but it's one thing to prove it in battle but not using your spouse as a sex pawn to contest with your own son and his girlfriend though.

I loved it when it was Trunks turn to be the alpha, very very sexy

Ah the BV scenes were refreshing like a tall glass of iced tea in a blistering heat. It was quenching. I love love how you can convey their intimacy without having to be so graphic. You feel that heat oozing between them with their words and their touch. I'm so happy with this update.

Don't stop the story's keep going

I absolutely enjoyed Vegeta and Bulma scene here. congrats on Trunks' tail.

Looool

Bulla has SSJB nut. She gonna be a fighter. Furthermore she's way stronger than Pan I wanna see she beat up bullies at school and Vegeta ends up going to a teacher/parent conference and he scares tf outta everyone in school

OMGGGGG I DONT GET EMAIL UPDATES MY STORAGE ON GMAIL IS FULL. YAY YOU UPDATE