Reviews for Twists and Time |
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Jk chapter 3 . 6/27/2018 This looks like a good plot, really. But you need to be more specific with who is speaking what. If you don't, it all gets mucked up. Like, if one para is dedicated for Rose’s dialogues, don't add how doctors are reacting in it. Put it in next line or diffentiate it more like: “..” she said to which Doctor grinned. That's my piece of advice for ya. Great story. I'm definitely waiting for more! - |
Dreamcatcher56 chapter 3 . 6/22/2018 Yes, am feeling that there is more going on with Eleven than we know...I am not too happy with his attitude towards Rose...if he has changed his mind about wanting her along he should just tell her and save them both some pain...look forward to more. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2018 I hope they can find a way together, maybe both are unsecure and believe that the other one doesn't want the deeper relationship. |
Dreamcatcher56 chapter 2 . 6/18/2018 A bit unsure of this Nine...is he from Rose's past or is he possibly from an AU with his own Rose? Either way, you have drawn me in. |
Dreamcatcher56 chapter 1 . 6/16/2018 An interesting twist with a new Doctor and one so far removed from either Nine or Ten...appears that they are both unhappy with the current situation and wonder if this new adventure will provide clarity as to stay as is or depart to begin a new...a storyline you don't typically see, look forward to what comes next! |