Reviews for Pretence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() the forwardness is so .. refreshing? in a way? miscommunication trope between diametrically opposed characters gets tiring haha |
![]() ![]() Loved it, particularly the teenage banter since so many writers write them as adults forgetting their age. |
![]() ![]() Oh, wow. I really, really loved this story. You’ve captured a generation of heartbreak and healing all at once. I immensely enjoyed Draco’s journey here and his steadfastness once he knew what he wanted. Hermione’s fear of jumping into the abyss made so much sense but I loved how they did it together. Just beautiful, thank you so very much for writing and posting. |
![]() ![]() Gwhy didn't she buy condoms? I feel like they would have spells against the hormonal birth control too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a great story, i may have stayed up all night reading haha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ginny should be grateful. Hermione is sacrificing a lot, the least she could do is acknowledge it. Great story, btw. I like how real everyone seems to be, although it’s sad. It makes sense that everyone is going to have issues getting out of war. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far the story is really intriguing. A forced marriage is a trope for a reason, but I haven’t come across a swap like Hermione’s done in any fandom yet. Also, l think you’ve prepared the postwar backround very well. The gloomy atmosphere in Hogwarts, PTSD’esque reactions and outbursts bring a bit of realism to the story. So does the disappointment in the magic world (and perhaps the magic itself) expressed by Hermione, but I’m pretty sure she’s not the only one feeling that way. I love angst and drama! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, this was brilliant! one of best dramione ive ever read! It was dark, witty, hot! And I really appreciate Hermionie not being a princess and Draco not dwelling on money. It was more real that both had their war coping. Also I appreciate a lot your way of them expressing their feelings! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you. I really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a fun chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im angry against Ginny for her weakness but still understand |
![]() ![]() ![]() Daaamn so much hate |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow it's so akward between them, I can't see how they will be fine |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow they get so much trauma and damage during this war |