Reviews for Pretence
MagicisFidem chapter 54 . 11/14
You know, Who needs friends is my favorite fic EVER. I've read the spanish traslation like 6 times or even more.
Now, I found out this story and loved it so much! Loved Draco! So sad he had no friends during the year. When he almost cried at Malfoy Manor because he said he was in love with her... I got really emotional.
You r such a grest author. Love your writing!
Kotodashi Kyoshi chapter 54 . 9/7
I remember this story from a while ago, I think i must have stopped reading during updates and just now remembered to come back to it now that its finished. The ending seemed a little forced, like you kinda just gave up on the story halfway through. I wasnt too fond of the ending, it was just too vague for me, but I’m glad you finished it and Im glad I could come back to it. I re-read the whole thing in a day. Hopefully somewhere they got their happy ending.
whatamithinking chapter 54 . 8/25
Just finished this story and I am absolutely obsessed ! This story needs so much more attention, it’s definitely now in my top 10. I loved it so much I loved the way their relationship developed throughout so well and the build up was just amazing fic highly recommend
Guest chapter 54 . 8/5
Gracias!
Fue precioso!
XxxChelaxxX chapter 1 . 7/11
Just finished reading and not sure where I'm at...

I got really into the story at the beginning it felt like it was unfolding at a good pace and we would get to see how the characters lives changed after the war... But then you kind of lost me? I felt like story lines got abruptly cut of, or forgotten? Like Hermione has taken up smoking as a coping mechanism... but it sort of disappears after the 3 chapter and you never hear about it again.
It felt like when their relationship started it all started to get a bit rushed.. more grammatical errors and big time jumps, sometimes cutting off scenes that I would have liked to read more of.

They're declaration of love was underwhelming, I just didn't feel it. The ending as well just didn't mesh with me. To just shove them out there in the world... Not feeling it.

But thank you so much for putting it out there! It was a new take and was good to read for the most part.

- XxxChelaxxX
Deljah chapter 54 . 5/24
Yet another outstanding fic! You are so very, very good! Thanks for sharing
LibraOfSlytherin chapter 54 . 5/5
This was cute. I enjoyed the progression of their relationship. I didnt even realize I reached the end before I couldnt scroll anymore. 333
LibraOfSlytherin chapter 24 . 5/5
I'm sure this an unpopular opinion but if I was Hermione I'd be telling Ginny to fuck off honestly. She gets to be happy with her marriage with Harry and yet makes jokes about Hermione being with Malfoy. As if Hermione didnt put herself with Draco for HER benefit. So GINNY didnt unalive herself. Hermione didnt wanna be with Draco, she didn't do that for shits and giggles. I'm sure there is no ill intent in Ginny's comments towards Hermiones situation but if I was her I would just keep my mouth shut and worry about myself.
NifflersNogtailsNargles chapter 54 . 4/15
Just got done reading this, it was fantastic! Really creative and a wonderfully in-character Draco. Well done!
Serennos chapter 54 . 3/7
Another hugely satisfying story finished. Always love your versions of Draco and Hermione. Many thanks.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/7
Do you mean ‘exacerbate’ as opposed to exasperate?
Serennos chapter 1 . 1/15
Appreciate how you’ve written a completely jaded (and who wouldn’t be?) but pragmatic Hermione...
Thechit chapter 28 . 1/11
I didn't know what to expect when I started reading this story, but again you don' t disappoint.
LOVEDRACO chapter 18 . 1/10
The piggyback
ride
was funny !
HDRH chapter 54 . 12/16/2020
Another story finished. Another great one. I'd love a sequel. Please write more, H
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