|Reviews for Babysitting The Brat|
| Rainstar25 chapter 1 . 6/17
Oh, please continue! I'd love to see confrontations between the spoiled brat, Mrs. Figg, and her not-so-ordinary cats.
| Henny B-F-R chapter 1 . 6/17
It's an interesting set up, and I do look forward to seeing what types of confrontations they have if this is an ongoing story. However, I do question why they would send Harry off to a summer camp (which costs money) - even if it's not a nice summer camp, they could find a nice one for Dudley, or he could stay with any of his friends. Also, just a small dialect tip, I really don't think Vernon would use 'pet' - it's very Northern and working class, and the Durselys are from Surrey (south) and are middle class. That said, you capture the characters well, especially how spoilt and manipulative Dudley is.
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