Reviews for Unintended consequences |
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![]() ![]() Will you continue with this story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() 3 seashells ?! Bwaaahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha |
![]() ![]() The Kelvin timeline was idiotic,like discovery. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter I enjoyed reading it. |
![]() ![]() Great story, don't get stuck in little details, just tell the story. It's a fictional story about fictional universes, and more importantly its YOUR story, so use whatever facts you deem correct to maintain your story's direction. I have some minor quibbles with some things, but guess what? It's not my story and I'm enjoying it, so who cares. Anon jnr, you don't know what you're talking about. Miguel Alcubierre himself gave a lecture a month or two ago on this subject (and others, he does more than warp drive you know). Summary of his conclusion: Possible, but unlikely with current levels of technology and understanding. That is not "zero point zero", is it? Another interesting fact: his version of warp drive has NO upper speed limit. And you can't see outside the warp bubble while travelling in it. It's on YT, look it up before you put your ignorance on display. I'd believe Dr Alcubierre over some anonymous bugman any day. And FFX, don't listen to the whiners about more frequent shorter chapters. Your stuff is worth waiting for. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() I was enjoying this until you started with the identity politics.i mean,I've already seen references about the gemonese,the Sagittarius and the tauron(the last everyone else seems to dismiss or despise)and naglala is taken aback by what a dead system Lord said? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward to more chapters..! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good update. But I hope you update with shorter chapters every few weeks then a long chapter every few months. I've been looking forward to a new update for months. Well, I just hope Cain isn't the first person to make contact with the Tau'ri. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() 13k that's not a company that's a krifing Division. So essentially Cerberus is the Colonial version of the French foreign Legion which if memory serves went from a dedicated mercenary army to a legitimate Division in the French Army. I can easily see that happening here. Also for any, who read this review, please go to spacedock on youtube he covers all the ships mentioned in this fanfic and really helps with visuals. Well most of the ships. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Esta muy bueno el capítulo mas que esta pasando en las colonias más que se encontrando a los traidores mas la alianza con los cylons rebeldes mas que pasa con la tierra y pegaso mas que sucederá en el viaje al nuevo planeta |
![]() ![]() Nice chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep it up :) |
![]() ![]() I'll accept a few misspelled words,in return for this very good,like you researched it before you wrote it. thanks |
![]() ![]() Please update |