Such a wonderful story. I’m pleased to see I can purchase it and will do so!

“Fitzy’s” only real friend is Bingley. Everyone else has an agenda that works for them, but ignores anything Fitzy might want. So sad.

You depict Darcy so beautifully, his struggles, and the compassion from Georgiana is heart breakingly perfect. Truly enjoyed reading

Thank you for writing this story Laina! I very much enjoyed the story, but even more so enjoyed how it caused me to be introspective. Your story struck a cord with me at different moments that I think will lead me to more peace with past situations and maybe even future events in my life. I liked the genuinety and good of the story as it shines through the heavier or darker parts of the story. I guess the dark is needed for the good to shine through, huh? Thank you for giving me perspective! I am so excited to read more!

Jane Bennet is so vile
Good she is going to end up with disloyal man whore Colonel

I did not think Jane was in character. I can't see her being disrespectful of Mr. Dracy by calling him that man. nor can I believe that she would believe Wickham. but otherwise I am enjoying this very much.

I thought that this made more sense than the original

very nice, I loved your departure from the original conversation

I am absolutely enthralled by your story. What an interesting plot and amazing writing.
Thank you for sharing!
I Love how you changed Lady C and Col F's characters and how perfectly canon speeches fit different situations throughout this tale
Loved a more assertive Bingley and Georgiana as well as a more sympathetic Caroline.

This is beyond beautiful. The way Lady Anne would do anything to soothe Darcy even if she didn't understand him is just heart-warming. She was his safe place and now she is gone. Poor Darcy!

I have finally finished reading this story. when the writer was beginning it I had begun to follow but somehow got side tracked! I enjoyed this very much. I have a niece with a form of autism. She has had a struggle with touch and different textures. It was hard when she was younger but she's now 12 years old and is more at ease.

I am sorry that this happened to you. I don't understand why people think they can steal another's work and not get caught!

The views that Edwin is expressing are unfortunately views that lasted up until the past few decades. I'm pleased that for the most part people don't view autism that way.

I'm shocked that Jane Bennet thought that way about Darcy especially since she had been around him several times.

Mrs Skeffington is possibly worse than Lady Catherine!I remember the old movie Mr Skeffington with Bette Davis... she was not a nice person. )