|Reviews for A Change in the Stars|
| orionastro chapter 2 . 42m
very good new chapter, so good that they are now in the past, now it's avoiding the war of the 5 kings and warn the Kingdoms of the Extreme danger that is already moving beyond the Wall, bring the wildlings into Westeros to save them from a destiny worse than dead, and start creating massive numbers of Drangonglass weapons , to defend the Wall against the Others . Cant hardly wait for the next chapters.
| Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 7/2
lovely, hope you will update soon xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22
Hmm, so Jon also sends a daughter back? Ugh.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/21
Wow, are they actually sending their bodies back? Or is it the memories? Lyarra has to be physical...how does this work with two Sansas, Sams and a NEW Lyarra?
| CzarZelinsky chapter 1 . 6/23
BlahJonsa, but still looking forward to reading more!
| anja.quickert.9 chapter 1 . 6/23
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| Anime Princess chapter 1 . 6/22
How does a person who doesn’t exist in the time they are going to exist? How will Sansa, Sam, and Lyarra change or influence anything if no one will believe them? They’ll need help! What is older Sansa and Sam to do? Mourn forever and a day for their loved ones as they watch these new ones live and change their own life experiences?
Sansa and Jon? Who will Lyarra be with? Will Sam still go to the wall and bring back Gillie and little Sam or shall he let younger Sam do it? HOW WILL THIS WORK OUT?!
| AJ Granger chapter 1 . 6/20
So in this story, an older Sansa, Sam, and Lyarra (your OC) will arrive in Westeros and will try to change things... You do realize that there's no way you add Jon's black locks and Sansa's red and get a silver haired child, genetics don't work like that. The lava imagery is interesting. I'm curious to see where you take this and how effective these adults are, though, if adults in their own body then they can't be themselves because their past selves already exist. Also, by reversing time, if they go back to before Lyarra was born, then it's likely she either won't exist any longer and will simply disappear, or it will likely affect her ability to exist in the new timeline. Time travel is an interesting theory in and of itself. I guess we will see how this works in your story.
| thunder18 chapter 1 . 6/20
Great chapter Update soon
| Moshi chapter 1 . 6/20
Well shit, is there more?
| edboy4926 chapter 1 . 6/20
Looking forward to more
| orionastro chapter 1 . 6/20
very good beginning for the story , lets see who they will change the events ,and keep the Kingdom united to defeat the Long night and the Night King , Cant hardly wait for the next chapters .