Reviews for The Witch of the Elemental Nations |
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David Gumazon1 chapter 5 . 10/2/2019 YEY! You're back! Me: Waiting for new chapters. |
Ayman El Kadouri chapter 5 . 9/30/2019 Yay your back |
Guest chapter 4 . 9/5/2019 I want to read more. |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/5/2019 Madara and Hashirama are good friends. |
FanBoy01 chapter 1 . 9/5/2019 Mobs are cool. |
Junior VB chapter 4 . 9/5/2019 Not bad. |
FoulerGlint60 chapter 4 . 6/26/2019 interesting hope to read more of this story. |
Janek Gra chapter 4 . 10/19/2018 amazing idea, please continue! |
Dylan-A-Friend chapter 4 . 9/1/2018 Yes More Chapters! - |
Naosj chapter 1 . 8/24/2018 I think you're doomed. Dig down, grow wheat and mushrooms underground, become a mole person. Especially since you're dealing with the war crazy first generation. |
im gonna follow chapter 3 . 8/9/2018 ur story is blocky and keep going update this ctossover fic. It's awesome :D |
gamemastaftw chapter 2 . 7/31/2018 yo it's me again your doing well, however your writing is still very blocky, also your character seems to be well done. |
Dylan-A-Friend chapter 1 . 7/30/2018 I REALLY Like The Idea Please Continue! - |
David Gumazon1 chapter 1 . 7/25/2018 Archemedes ship mod screwed the physics. Why not throw Cubic Cobblestone to a ninja, it's super heavy. Lol Anyway between ch1-2 timeskip? It's good fic but fast pace would be... Eh it's bad (don't do it or else ur fic would be ded because of short life span like other fics). It's rare fics, but ur fic needs tragedy, action, adventure, friendship (and romance's optional) genres and so do more characters interactions to push further ideas. 5 mods wouldn't be useful all the time in mid battle because Ninja is super fast and it's meelee battle. 100 mods please so you could rekt Naruto in no time. OP girl MC would be single forever xD. |
itsFAX chapter 2 . 7/1/2018 Haha I love it |