Well ya, she would probably be not a fighter, I tried finding mods that would help, but that mostly guns and swords, not really the character I’m trying to write.

well from what I can tell you have started off well, and just need a beta. what I mean by ruin is that don't make your character a Mary sue. she need to fail, or have a few flaws to keep this story nice and bumpy.

What do you mean by ruin?

you have a good idea don't ruin it