Reviews for Systema
yrlastin chapter 70 . 15h
The AN's are beginning to pile up!
yrlastin chapter 51 . 19h
Poor Yang...Fucking Emerald or Neo!
GamerBlood chapter 7 . 8/9
Blake and his book, it's like Kakashi and his Icha Icha, they both insist that it's either romance or literary art, we all know it's porn literature XD
Random chapter 4 . 8/2
Isnt aura supposed to be capable of doing something like a wave slash thing that jaune did? Well, not the bolt one but still
Anon chapter 3 . 8/2
I'm not really familiar with rwby to say for sure. But if his semblance IS the system, he should be able to use aura, no?
wtfchrlz chapter 21 . 8/1
Does literally every skill need to have "thanks to the system" at this point? We get it, the MC is worthless without the system. Stop hammering it in.
wtfchrlz chapter 19 . 8/1
The food fight was stupid. Speaking of stupid, is the MC ever going to change how he acts now that he has a way to get stronger and track his progress objectively? He's only used the training room once and even then he mentioned how much of a waste it's been for him to not be using it, and he's still showing no signs that that's going to change.
wtfchrlz chapter 18 . 8/1
Ruby and Jaune have barely interacted at all aside from some small talk. Would it kill you to actually have the characters earn their relationships with each other rather than just telling us that they're close?
wtfchrlz chapter 17 . 8/1
Jaune's family seems shitty in every FF. What's the point in leaving one out of 8 kids completely defenseless and ignorant of the world when generic monsters can attack at any time?
wtfchrlz chapter 16 . 8/1
Why is the MC working under the assumption that everyone other than him and the people close to him would recognize his system? Literally only one teacher in the entire school noticed it and they're all professionals who've seen a lot. Feels like lazy writing that this is even an issue.
wtfchrlz chapter 14 . 8/1
"A man like this should've, and wasn't, an easy fight by any stretch"

Tf does that mean? Also why would Jaune even be mad at Blake about walking off? They've barely spoken. It's ridiculous for him to assume he should be trusted at this point. Feels like you're just handwaving all the character development or having it take place in the background where the reader can't see it.
Guest chapter 8 . 7/17
Sigh.. Thought I finally found something worth reading. Then comes this stupid revelation in this chapter.

I thought Mc was unique with this whole 'gamer system' of his, guess not. Welp... You get a system! You get a system! And you get a system! Hooray... Everybody gets a system! (Overreacting a bit, but it is what it is.)
Shadowstorm-Vash chapter 98 . 7/7
Not going to lie the oath breaker’s introduction on the floating island makes no sense. They’d have had to know the flight plan for the group. Like destination and when they were leaving and theat was decided on the fly. Also Jaune turning into a wuss just because his magic abilities were cut off was dumb. Even more dumb is the thought that Salem has all the strong people and hasn’t been using them till now. They probably should have been saved for a different story instead of a late story addition that makes little sense. Also they’re a bit edgy
Shadowstorm-Vash chapter 91 . 7/7
Seem heavily inspired by the anime Bleach
Shadowstorm-Vash chapter 67 . 7/6
The mystery of why those people disappeared was interesting but abandoning it for dungeon delving isn’t as interesting, as you lost the suspense and horror of the initial encounter.
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