Cool story.

BEST BOOK EVER

i loved this! it fit all of JK's original story along with the Yugioh Characters! i loved how everyone blamed Joey and really enjoyed reading the story!

Great story! i never thought i would read a HP/YGO fanfic, great job!

Wow. Awesome story. I'm writing a Harry Potter/Yu-Gi-Oh crossover myself. And I now realize all the mistakes I made. :) An awesome read. Though I read it years after you published it.

cool story !

XD I LOVE THIS STORY! THIS HAS BECOME MY FAVORITE STORY ON THIS SITE FROM THIS MOMENT ON! I have a feeling i'm going to love this story by the time i'm done and i'm planning to read the sequals! You have a real talent for writing, please keep it up!

It's a finished Harry Potter Yu-Gi-Oh crossover! Le Gasp. And a well written one at that. Nice Job. )

Wow, I had no idea that the original was so different from the other version that I read first. It's almost like reading two separate, totally different stories. The only thing I kept having a problem with was the Japanese, there were some words I couldn't find translations for. I know very few words of Japanese.

Just loved the story! i couldn't stop giggling! you should do one for the second year! i just cannot believe you made yami bakura take over ryou's body for good!*_*! Keep up with the malfoy hates everyone stuff its really funny!:)

Nice story! Somebody enlighten me. i thought yami yuugi was called atem?

Oy, it's got better the nearer the end came.

But same critique here, there were too familiar situations than in the book (Yami Bakura acting like Hermione in front of the Devil Snare)

But you added some of your own ideas and some things should not be changed. I go with it for this is an old story of yours.

I don't like Marik having the Ring though. I like the idea of the Bakuras having it, it belongs to them! Even with Mahaado as ancestor of Marik, it don't belong to him... why don't give him the eye? Who says one must put it in 'stead of the own eye for use? Or Marik could get the Ankh/Key or Scales (even if Draco gets them later on, he could have got the other!) Don't know, it makes me sad Bakura without his Ring... *sniff*

I read on later, so you can await some reviews sooner or later

Lolchen

OH MY GOSH! This story was so good. I liked what you did with it. I can't wait to read teh rest of them.

Kel

Next review for you, for I have collected some other critic points (there's no arguing in saying your style is good, ne?) Don't take it as an insult for it is not meant to be but inspiration to make fics better for I don't know if this is your first, second or tenth fiction.

1) Why didn't anyone complained or even recognized the age-difference between the Japanese and the other first years? Non-logical.

2) Too less yamis and where did Ryou and Kaiba went? On holidays? What's with they're houses and they're scedules and the other stuff? Do they even live anymore?

3) I don't think it's likely for Yami playing a Penalty Game unpunished by the staff and I thought Dumbledore would talk to them about there Items and all for he seems to know about that.

4) Technology is not working at Hogwarts. So unless they use magic to make it work they can't duell with duell disk. Suguroku should've known. (I don't think it's likely for him to be sacked for just playing games. Look at Goyle i.e.! He's plainly stupid and survived 'til sixth year!)

5) Why does Marik have Ra anyways? At the end of Battle City Yugi got it. And he has Obelisk, too. And the duell was really unrealistic short. (I know the Manga/Anime duells are unrealistic actually!)

Hope you don't take it personally )

Well, reading till 4 chapter, I decided to give you a review already. And I have some points to get straight.

First of all, "Kaiba" does NOT mean "horse" but "sea horse", wich sounds better for a Japanese legend says sea horses are the ancestors/descendents/cubs of dragons. That suits Kaiba right, doesn't it?

Second, I remember you called Yugi's owl "Panseru" after Yami. Now, I cant connecting that name with Great Pharaoh Atemu. After all, Atemu was his name, wasn't it?

Third I don't think Kaiba would go to Hogwarts - whatever Dumbledore tries. Only for duelling Yugi or stuff like that I think he could be 'convinced'. Even if he saw magic in Battle City, etc. he didn't believe it. Why trust a odd stranger, if it all could be illusions?

And last but not least, there's the fact the plot so far is VERY simillar to Harry's experience. Not liking Malfoy, not liking Hermione, feeling you don't belong anywhere... You just divided it between those three/five. That's not very original, you'll understand?

But nonetheless I'm going on reading and giving you reviews. For they are to critize and correct/motivate an author. We'll see how you did with the other chapters.

Oh, and your style is rather good