Reviews for Confused
LittleWing chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
It's been a while since anyone posted anything new in this fandom, it's good to see a new fic in here! This was very good. I liked the dialogue, very cool. I don't want this to come off negatively, but it could use a little more detail outside of the dialogue. I'd be more than happy to help ya if you want, just mail me. But overall this was a good fic, and I can't wait to see where this is going. Keep writing.
LittleWing chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
It's been a while since anyone posted anything new in this fandom, it's good to see a new fic in here! This was very good. I liked the dialogue, very cool. I don't want this to come off negatively, but it could use a little more detail outside of the dialogue. I'd be more than happy to help ya if you want, just mail me. But overall this was a good fic, and I can't wait to see where this is going. Keep writing.
tlgirl chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
your dialog was nicely written. maybe just a little more detail and imagery next chapter? maybe? keep writing, well done! :D