Yeah no idea why people are bashing this really good story perhaps their jealous that you can write harems well, though I do agree on way to many for the harem mainly the ocs since with the genderbends that gives a good amount for the harem plus the heroines but other then that this stories pacing is amazing… also the Saitama getting recognized… is canon like literally Blast finds out how strong he is all you’ve done is speed it up but with reasonable reason why it sped up, its not like the world has found out just a few heroes. So… nothing really changes there. But I do hope you continue because while I don’t check this every day its one of the few stories I can read that isn’t male reader or Naruto and I’d miss this.

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Je viens de finir le tome 23 et je me demande si tu va rajouter les sœur lézard Reptra et Raptra ? Parce rrrrrr !

hey its been awhile can you make another chapter soon

I have to say this had some promise but the story is riddled with the usual bad harem tropes and at this point it’s clear that won’t be changing, among other issues.

Firstly, there are WAY too many characters, most of which are OCs that add nothing to the story other than to serve as a non-subtle insertion of the author’s fetishes. At this point in the story, Saitama easily has over 10 girls lusting after him with even more on the way. I can tell by the end of this there’s going to be like 20 girls in his harem, which is just an absurd amount of characters. Secondly, there’s basically zero development on the actual canon characters like Tatsumaki and Fubuki, but the stupid throwaway seaweed monster has practically most of the entire fanfic dedicated to her and her clones. Thirdly, there’s way, way, way, WAY too much repeated dialogue—specifically the explaining of why Saitama has monsters living with him.

On top of all this, many characters are completely out of character. There is no world where Saitama would spare so many monsters. And before anyone brings up Rover or Black Sperm, remember that Rover was reduced to a literal normal dog and Black Sperm is literally about as weak as a normal human since most of his cells were destroyed, and despite that he’s still being watched by three other heroes. Also, Saitama doesn’t train anymore because he doesn’t want to get stronger. He’s too strong as is, which is also why he refuses to learn Bang’s martial arts. I have no idea if the author of this has even watched OPM or is just a gooner who’s jerked it to the girls from the series. Speaking of Bang, he would NEVER take a monster as a disciple. Neither would Nichirin.

Then there’s the “romance”, if you can even call it that. Basically every woman in this fic falls in love with Saitama because he’s strong. That’s it. It pretends there are other reasons, but there isn’t. Saitama barely acknowledges the girls for most of the story, so saying it’s his personality or whatever is a total laugh. That’s not to even mention how Saitama is SUPPOSED to be nearly emotionless and uncaring, which to anyone who’s watched/read OPM, is noticed and mentioned by countless characters who’ve interacted with Saitama. Then comes chapter 45 where Saitama randomly says he loves genderbent Vaccine Woman when this was NEVER hinted at or implied—and then they bang. The most we got from Saitama’s feelings towards ANY of the girls was him occasionally blushing when they would basically shove their oversized breasts in his face. He’s never shown direct interest in any of the girls, let alone Vaccine Woman who’s barely in the story beyond the first 10 or so chapters.

In regards to the other male characters not named Saitama, they’re mostly relegated to being jokes and punching bags. Charanko is basically immediately upstaged by one of the OCs as Bang’s disciple and is humiliated over and over again. Already talked about Bang being OOC. Tank Top Master, Darkshine, Sonic, Flashy Flash, etc. basically all do the same thing of seeing how strong Saitama is then going “damn he’s strong, how can I ever compete?” then proceed to cope by training futilely. There’s also this really uncomfortable trend throughout the story where random dudes will basically sexually harass the girls only to get their asses beat by one of the girls or Saitama himself. This happens SO MUCH it’s insane. I’m legit convinced this has happened to every single woman in the “harem” at this point. I highly, highly doubt there are this many perverts running around in the OPM world.

Genos is the one and only saving grace in this dumpster fire, because ironically, he’s the only character who is IN CHARACTER. He hates the monsters and wants them dead. Based. I was rooting for him to finally kill that seaweed bimbo and the other OCs to save us from this cringefest. But alas, too bad the gooner author had to instead also humiliate him by having Saitama basically disown him because Genos was RIGHTFULLY mad that one of the OCs was parlaying with the Monster Association behind everyone’s backs. Yeah, because that makes any sense when Genos is basically Saitama’s closest friend, even more than King. You know, the same guy who died to Cosmic Garou and caused Saitama to get his emotions back and even made Saitama not be happy about finally finding a strong foe who could challenge him because of his grief over Genos’s death. Yeah, Saitama would DEFINITELY choose some monster sluts over his best friend. Mhm. Don’t care that Genos comes back later in the story either, the damage is already done and Genos is just made to cuck down to Saitama’s harem anyways. Embarrassing.

Oh yeah, I almost forgot about the worst offense in this fic: King is exposed as a fraud to everyone and is humiliated. Fuck you, King didn’t deserve that.

can you make watchdog man watchdog woman and add her? thanks!

Honestly this story is disappointing, what's the point of adding more protagonists to the story or waifus if in the end they're not going to change the events, how difficult can it be for Mizuki or the other monster girls to record themselves demonstrating Saitama's strength or something similar that would reveal that King is the fraud that always steals the credits from him , besides it seems illogical that Saitama decides to continue being part of the association of "heroes", despite knowing about the corruptions and hypocrisies that will never respect any "monster" regardless of whether they are peaceful or Saitama himself for his "common" appearance. Maybe if Saitama decided to lead the monster association or reach an agreement with Psykos would be much better.

P.S: Chapters (R18) should be marked or uploaded to AO3 to be more explicit. "45, 50, 52, 53"

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The thing put serious when Tatsumaki is angry.

That scene is ALWAYS Heartwarming.

gran historia ansio poder ver la continuacion gracias por el trabajo

Ngl the bimbofication, body-wise at least, is a bit weird with how exaggerated the proportions get but aside from that easily ignorable fact the story is good fun. Monster Girls are always peak.

Sometimes I see Vaccine Woman as the main love interest for Saitama sure ki seaweed is making him feel attractive towards the girl and it is a Harem story but given VW is the first monster girl who unfortunate to meet Saitama fist but as the story proceeds she has gotten comfortable around Saitama as well starting feeling attached to him when he’s let her stay with him for a while until she moves to another room with the Subs queen.

I saw no problem with the Subterranean Queen’s clothes.