Reviews for The Vanquisher of Grindelwald |
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![]() ![]() good start, could use a little polishing in choice of words and structure. using "got" should instead be "become or became" because it had different uses and rather breaking in the sentence |
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![]() ![]() ![]() ProclaimerofHeroes here from Reddit R&R, I read both the prologue and part one, and I'm glad I did before leaving a review. The prologue and beginning felt like just a wall of text that I had to get through. Don't get me wrong, I am glad I did read through and I very much enjoyed Tom and Dumbledore, but it was a bit much to get to. I wish I could give you a way to reconstruct it otherwise, but I can't think of any. Everything is needed and succinct and one you do get into it you want to read it, and I'm interested to see where this rabbit hole leads. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love it Ooh who’s playing the new dark lord is it albus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oooooh this is good can't wait for morr |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finished reading all 14 chapters, it was a very engaging read. Like how you craft this alternate Riddle's world. Will be looking forward to how the story progresses. |
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![]() ![]() Wouah ! Mais comment j'ai fait pour ne pas tomber sur cette histoire avant. Elle est tout simplement originale, fantastique et passionnante. En plus, c'est mis à jour régulièrement, j'ai vraiment hâte de lire la suite |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it Poor tom dont worrk harry will still love u tom Home will gets his wand snaped nd azcaban |